Friday Flash Fiction
  • Home
    • About Friday Flash Fiction
    • Writing Good Flash Fiction >
      • Competition Tips
    • Terms & Conditions
    • GDPR Compliance
  • 100-Word Stories
  • Other Archived Material
    • Longer Stories
    • Poetry
  • Authors
    • A
    • B
    • C
    • D
    • E-F
    • G-I
    • J-L
    • M-O
    • P-R
    • S-V
    • W-Z

What's in a Name, by Doug Bartlett

1/5/2020

 
They sat huddled in the solitude of their home. What was their home they now considered to be their prison cell. Time was dragging by. A minute seemed like an hour, an hour seemed like a day and so on. The walls were closing in on them and they were getting on each other's nerves after being given several false hopes that the end was in sight.
Their medication for depression was long gone and their despondency that was slowly overtaking them was now accelerating to warp speed that could only lead to a full-blown disaster.
Unfortunately, they only saw one way out. They came up with a detailed plan that they would fulfill this very night. They would have one last dinner together. Their favorite music was playing in the background. They finished their meal which included steak and lobster cooked to perfection. Dessert would consist of an overabundance of sleeping pills that would be downed with a glass of wine they had been saving for a special occasion. They toasted each other but before they could pick up the pills there was a knock at the door. This interruption was not included in their plan.
Who could that be at this hour? He answered the door only to discover a young, thin woman standing there.
“How may I help you?” he asked.
“Forgive me for bothering you but I’m your neighbor from down the street,” she explained,” and I’m just checking on everybody to see if they’re okay. May I come in?”
He hesitated, thinking it is only prolonging the inevitable, but relented when he realized she was nice enough to voluntarily do this task.
“Come in and have a seat,” he stated.
They warmed themselves by the fire as she continued to talk. Her bubbly, effervescent personality shone through with every word she spoke .They overflowed with encouragement. This was not just hollow, sugar-coated wishes. She talked with confident authority. She spoke of how this would soon be over. She reminded them of all the good things they had to look forward to. How good life would be after getting through this . In fact, life would be even better having gone through it.
“Well, I must be going. I have others I need to visit,” the neighbor stated as she got up and walked to the front door.The couple also got up but went to the dining room table where they discreetly swept the pills into the trash can.
“Oh,” he responded to the departing visitor,” we never got your name.”
She turned before walking out the door and said, “ My friends call me “Hope”.”
Jim link
1/5/2020 03:33:02 pm

Hope, indeed. A good neighbor to have...
Nice
Jim

Doug
1/5/2020 05:53:52 pm

Thanks Jim. Yes we can all use a neighbor like that and hopefully be a neighbor like that.

Mike B
1/5/2020 10:10:49 pm

Uplifting and Encouraging Story, at least it ends up that way, Perfect Timing. Well written Doug, brought Psalm 121:1 to my mind "Where does my hope come from my hope comes from the Lord."

Doug
1/5/2020 10:25:41 pm

Thanks Mike for your input.

Mike U
2/5/2020 05:57:27 am

Good job Doug! We all need Hope in our lives!

Doug
2/5/2020 07:52:12 pm

Yes we do. Thanks Mike.

Sue Clayton
2/5/2020 07:55:17 am

Lovely, Doug. Let's hope "hope" sees us through to the end.

Doug
2/5/2020 07:53:52 pm

Oh she will. Thanks Sue.


Comments are closed.

    Longer
    Stories

    For the foreseeable future, the Longer Flash section is closed to submissions.

    Archives

    July 2025
    June 2025
    May 2025
    April 2025
    March 2025
    February 2025
    January 2025
    December 2024
    November 2024
    October 2024
    September 2024
    August 2024
    July 2024
    June 2024
    May 2024
    April 2024
    March 2024
    February 2024
    January 2024
    December 2023
    November 2023
    October 2023
    September 2023
    August 2023
    July 2023
    June 2023
    May 2023
    April 2023
    March 2023
    February 2023
    January 2023
    December 2022
    November 2022
    October 2022
    September 2022
    August 2022
    July 2022
    June 2022
    May 2022
    April 2022
    March 2022
    February 2022
    January 2022
    December 2021
    November 2021
    October 2021
    September 2021
    August 2021
    July 2021
    June 2021
    May 2021
    April 2021
    March 2021
    February 2021
    January 2021
    December 2020
    November 2020
    October 2020
    September 2020
    August 2020
    July 2020
    June 2020
    May 2020
    April 2020
    March 2020
    February 2020
    January 2020
    December 2019
    November 2019
    October 2019
    September 2019
    August 2019
    July 2019
    June 2019
    May 2019
    April 2019
    March 2019
    February 2019
    January 2019
    December 2018
    November 2018
    October 2018
    September 2018
    August 2018
    July 2018
    June 2018
    May 2018
    April 2018
    March 2018
    February 2018
    January 2018
    December 2017
    November 2017
    October 2017
    September 2017
    August 2017
    July 2017
    June 2017
    May 2017
    April 2017
    March 2017
    February 2017
    January 2017
    December 2016
    November 2016
    October 2016
    September 2016
    August 2016
    July 2016
    June 2016
    May 2016
    April 2016
    March 2016
    February 2016
    January 2016
    December 2015
    November 2015
    October 2015
    September 2015
    August 2015
    July 2015
    June 2015
    May 2015
    April 2015
    March 2015
    February 2015
    January 2015
    December 2014
    November 2014
    October 2014

Picture
Website by Platform 36