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When the Full Moon Comes, by Padmini Krishnan

17/6/2022

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The veil of darkness enveloping him, Sahil walked away from the smoke, stick in a hand and a hardened rock in another. His heart burned at the politician’s remarks and now the whole city was on fire. He looked at the shopping complex he had helped destroy. It had started as a small clothes’ store 40 years ago; his late father had told him. As a kid, he remembered shopping there with his mother, hiding behind dresses and shaking hands with the child mannequin. Sahil turned to the half-torn poster of the politician and tried to garner hate, but all that remained was emptiness. He stared at the full moon until the last embers of fire left his mind.

Inspector Chaand tossed in his bed; he still heard the cries of rioters screaming as he and other policemen beat them with sticks. Many of them had cried, ‘’I didn’t do it. I was a pedestrian.’’ Among them was a 10-year-old boy. Chaand shuddered; he no longer loved the city in which he was brought up. He looked out of his window at the full moon. It seemed stained with all the blood he had caused and endured that day. Turning away, he stared at the dark, quiet ceiling with glassy, tired eyes.

Ignoring a group of waiting investors, politician Raaz went to his study to prepare his next hate speech. He had become the most revered and the most hated amongst two sections of the country. His new speech would create further divisions, but what were a few lives compared to his progress? His leader had promised him a seat in the parliament. Raaz smiled. He turned, as he often did, to the full moon for inspiration.
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19 Comments
Jim Bartlett link
17/6/2022 04:07:26 pm

Wonderful. Padmini. We never quite know the power of that full moon, do we?
Nice
Jim

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Padmini
18/6/2022 09:07:30 am

It brings out people's hidden conscience to the fore (at least in this story). Not that Raaz has any...Thank you so much for reading, Jim:)

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Paritosh Chandra Dugar
17/6/2022 05:40:06 pm

How poignant, how satirical, and how well developed. A gripping story with a message. Well done, Padmini.

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Padmini
18/6/2022 09:10:05 am

Thank you so much, Paritosh. It is a reflection of the previous week's events...

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Krystyna
17/6/2022 10:06:45 pm

Beautiful language and imagery, Padmini. The moon in its ‘full’ appearance can be admired by every one of us. Sometimes not by the best of intentions.

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Padmini
18/6/2022 09:54:43 am

So true, Krystyna. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting.

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marjan sierhuis
17/6/2022 10:28:46 pm

A very powerful story with many layers, Padmini. Well done.

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Padmini
18/6/2022 09:55:26 am

Thank you so much, Marjan

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Pamela Kennedy
18/6/2022 08:50:43 am

Realistic, haunting, and wonderfully written, Padmini.

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Padmini
18/6/2022 09:56:59 am

Thank you so much, Pamela, for your encouraging words.

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Don Tassone link
18/6/2022 12:00:13 pm

A vivid reminder that we all gaze at the same moon. Well done, Padmini.

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Padmini
18/6/2022 12:38:28 pm

True. Thanks a lot, Don, for stopping over and commenting.

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Candace Arthuria Williams
18/6/2022 03:28:01 pm

"....who come to you in sheep's clothing but inwardly are ravenous wolves." Hear Raaz howl.

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Padmini
19/6/2022 03:33:10 am

Yes, that describes Raaz. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a comment, Candace.

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Dee Lorraine
19/6/2022 03:05:53 am

I agree with the previous comments. You wrote an outstanding story, Padmini. And what will the next full moon bring?

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Padmini
19/6/2022 01:03:08 pm

Maybe Raaz would be behind bars, Chaand a better policeman and Sahil would help rebuild the shopping complex. Thank you so much, Dee, for your kind words.

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Sue Clayton
19/6/2022 06:46:31 am

A mesmerising moon that can hypnotize moon-gazers. Unfortunately Raaz was inspired by the dark side of the moon.

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Padmini
19/6/2022 01:04:18 pm

So true, Sue. Thanks a lot for stopping over.

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Phyllis Souzaa
27/6/2022 06:31:57 pm

full moon for inspiration... and listiened for the howl of a wolf...

This was a fantastic piece!

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