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Wild Ivy, by Angela Carlton

20/5/2022

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The Poet’s mother, Ivy, was off, her mind was warped. The witch doctor had tried several remedies but nothing stuck. Mostly, she wandered through the town, over yonder, and into the woods while, the poet, Alice, clung to the sheets in a small bedroom for comfort. The village folks, in Vickery Creek, watched her roam and spoke about how the ivy vine is always growing on sidewalks, fences, and up walls. It’s unstoppable, wild.

Over time, the mother fell into the name, “Wild Ivy.”

“Wild Ivy, that poor woman,” they said, “she’s roaming the streets again,” the whispers carried on through the thick, sycamore trees until they reached Ivy’s ears. Sometimes, she cocked her head and tried to remember, think of something, anything. Wild Ivy tried-tried to find a path, this way back home to her daughter, the girl who could spin words, language that could take you anywhere and everywhere, tales that gave you a sense of hope, a bit of promise until the end.
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Brook
20/5/2022 11:13:31 pm

The images take you along with wild Ivy like into the woods and through the thick sycamore trees. You can feel how lost she is and how desperate she is to fine the path home to her daughter. On the other hand, her daughter is desperate too clinging to the sheets for comfort. How will they survive? How will it end?

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Ashley Smallwood
20/5/2022 11:41:14 pm

Good story! It leaves you wondering what's next? Keep up the good work!

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Angela Carlton link
20/5/2022 11:48:21 pm

Thank you, I'm fascinated with fairytales and adding a lyrical spin!

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Pamela Kennedy
21/5/2022 01:02:28 am

Nice work...I hope you will extend the story...

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Sue Clayton
22/5/2022 05:07:47 am

Overtones of the Brothers Grimm.

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