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Winning, by Sandra James

28/3/2022

 
‘Fantastic! What a win!’ He stood, raising his arm to the coach wearing matching colours, slowly making his way around the playing field, acknowledging the fans.

‘Umm… I don’t want to start an argument,’ frowned the man next to him, clad in opposition colours, who’d also raised a victorious salute into the air at the end of the game, ‘but if you look at the scoreboard, your team has only one goal beside its name while we have twenty-three.’

‘Ahh…’ said the first man, as they sat back in their seats while enthusiastic celebrations continued around them. ‘There’s winning and there’s winning.’

‘I don’t understand.’

‘Let me explain. See that man in the striped jersey? He’s our new coach. No one else wanted the job. We hadn’t won a game in years, didn’t even put a score on the board all last season. But he put his hand up, said he could make a difference.’

‘I guess one goal is something after a whole season without any,’ shrugged the second man.

‘Oh, yes, it is, but there’s so much more than that. Look around. Our fans equal yours in numbers, don’t you think?’

The second man glanced around the stands, then nodded.

‘The fans had deserted and our players were only the ones none of the other teams wanted. They’d all lost confidence. Hardly anyone turned up to the games; only a few of the players’ relatives and a couple of die-hards. Me, for one. It was depressing but our new coach said he’d make our football club fun again, bring out the true spirit of the game. He invited all the old fans to training nights, organised barbeques and let the kids join in. He had the older, experienced players mentor the younger players. The older guys were reborn and felt useful again and the young guys, who just needed some guidance, blossomed.

‘And now today, first game of the season and we’ve scored our first goal. That’s a win in my book. Look at the pride on the players’ faces. Look at the excited fans. United, proud and looking forward to the future. That’s what the game’s about. That’s winning.’

‘You could be right,’ said the second man. ‘I reckon you guys did win today.’

At season’s end, the team still hadn’t won a game but they’d come close several times and scored in every match, to the delight of their rapidly growing fan club.

Their efforts won more hearts and admiration than any other team in the league.

The two men found themselves sitting next to each other again at the awards night. As they chatted, the coach approached them.

‘Well done, mate,’ said the second man, and shook his hand. ‘You’ve done an amazing job.’

‘Thanks,’ said the coach. ‘I learned from someone who encouraged me all my life. I reckon I’ve just played it forward.

‘And… Dad’s still my number one fan,’ he grinned, as he put his arm around the first man’s shoulders.
Doug
28/3/2022 04:43:06 pm

The spirit of the game indeed. Great job Sandra.

Sandra James
28/3/2022 08:37:42 pm

Thanks, Doug! I think sometimes the spirit has been lost in favour of money etc in the big leagues and even the lower levels.

Dee Lorraine
28/3/2022 04:48:48 pm

There's winning and there's winning. A wonderful story, Sandra.

Sandra James
28/3/2022 08:41:03 pm

Thanks, Dee. Yes, all too often we can forget there's more than one type of winning 🙂

Jim Bartlett link
28/3/2022 04:57:56 pm

What a win, Sandra.
Good one
Jim

Sandra James
28/3/2022 08:42:33 pm

Thanks, Jim. It was a really satisfying write! At the end I felt like I'd played the season along with that team 🙂

Peggy Gerber
28/3/2022 06:59:42 pm

What a lovely story and a perfect last line.

Sandra James
28/3/2022 08:46:29 pm

Thanks, Peggy! The last line didn't come to me until a couple of days after I wrote the rest of the story, then one morning early as I walked my little dog, it came to me and I walked back a lot quicker to get it down 🐶😉

Sue Clayton
29/3/2022 03:27:11 am

Triumph reigns supreme for players, fans and the coach. Lovely story, Sandra. Gladdens the heart.

David Milner
29/3/2022 02:00:33 pm

I raise my arm. Play the game in good spirit and humour.

Andrea Damic
29/3/2022 02:32:27 pm

This story reminds me of the Ted Lasso show. An underdog reclaims its place under the sun again!

Don Tassone link
1/4/2022 10:17:13 am

"That's what the game's about." Well done, Sandra.


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