Friday Flash Fiction
  • Home
    • About Friday Flash Fiction
    • Writing Good Flash Fiction >
      • Competition Tips
    • Terms & Conditions
    • GDPR Compliance
  • 100-Word Stories
  • Other Archived Material
    • Longer Stories
    • Poetry
  • Authors
    • A
    • B
    • C
    • D
    • E-F
    • G-I
    • J-L
    • M-O
    • P-R
    • S-V
    • W-Z

Zero Tolerance, by Bobby Warner

1/2/2015

 
Part I.

The remnants of the Imperial Regiment marched down the gentle slope toward the narrow strip of beach bordering the sea.

"Regiment halt!" the General called out, for all his officers and noncoms had been slain so that there was no one else of a fitting rank to transmit his orders.

The General stood on a small, humped knoll, his sword held diagonally across his chest, and surveyed his men. They were almost totally exhausted, yet stood at rigid attention facing the sea. They were woefully overtaxed from a long, brutal battle, then a forced march of fifty miles or more without a rest break.

It would soon be over for them but, mercifully, they were too fatigued to care.


Part II


The General, his armor battered and his uniform in tatters, stood ramrod straight, and pointed his sword out toward the sea.

"We suffered grievous defeat but fought a hero's fight before retreating in the face of overwhelming odds. I am proud of you all, though woefully disappointed in all of us for not winning the battle. You know why we are here. It is the King's Decree that no Commander bring home his troops in defeat. That is why I marched you here, to the World's End shore, and the closest waters deep enough for our final purpose."

Raising his sword above his head, the General gave another command:

"Bugler, sound the order to charge!"

Though the bugler was wounded and exhausted, his bugle call was loud and clear. The General strode from the knoll and made his way toward the water's edge.


Part III

Again the General motioned with his sword, and broke into a double-time march until his heavy, scarred boots were splashing in the surf. Behind him, his soldiers managed a final outcry of warlust as they surged forward after their Commander. Very soon the whole lot of them, weighed down by their weapons and armor, floundered and sank beneath the gentle waves.

The sounds and movements of the soldiers reached the super-sensitive ears of a family of hungry sea serpents barely a mile distant. These titans of the ocean undulated toward shore, and the drowned corpses of the Imperial Regiment were ravenously devoured.


Part IV

When word of his Regiment's defeat reached the King, he flew into a rage and ordered all members of the soldiers' families be put to the sword.

The next day the King dispatched another Imperial Regiment to destroy the enemy, pointedly reminding the new General of the penalty for defeat.

Meanwhile, the family of sea serpents continued to linger near the shore in hopes of receiving another bountiful feast, while many miles to the east the new General began the long march to do battle with the thus far undefeated enemy.

Like the defeated General before him, the new Commander marched briskly with a confident gleam in his eye and the firm resolve that defeat was not an option.

Comments are closed.

    Longer
    Stories

    For the foreseeable future, the Longer Flash section is closed to submissions.

    Archives

    July 2025
    June 2025
    May 2025
    April 2025
    March 2025
    February 2025
    January 2025
    December 2024
    November 2024
    October 2024
    September 2024
    August 2024
    July 2024
    June 2024
    May 2024
    April 2024
    March 2024
    February 2024
    January 2024
    December 2023
    November 2023
    October 2023
    September 2023
    August 2023
    July 2023
    June 2023
    May 2023
    April 2023
    March 2023
    February 2023
    January 2023
    December 2022
    November 2022
    October 2022
    September 2022
    August 2022
    July 2022
    June 2022
    May 2022
    April 2022
    March 2022
    February 2022
    January 2022
    December 2021
    November 2021
    October 2021
    September 2021
    August 2021
    July 2021
    June 2021
    May 2021
    April 2021
    March 2021
    February 2021
    January 2021
    December 2020
    November 2020
    October 2020
    September 2020
    August 2020
    July 2020
    June 2020
    May 2020
    April 2020
    March 2020
    February 2020
    January 2020
    December 2019
    November 2019
    October 2019
    September 2019
    August 2019
    July 2019
    June 2019
    May 2019
    April 2019
    March 2019
    February 2019
    January 2019
    December 2018
    November 2018
    October 2018
    September 2018
    August 2018
    July 2018
    June 2018
    May 2018
    April 2018
    March 2018
    February 2018
    January 2018
    December 2017
    November 2017
    October 2017
    September 2017
    August 2017
    July 2017
    June 2017
    May 2017
    April 2017
    March 2017
    February 2017
    January 2017
    December 2016
    November 2016
    October 2016
    September 2016
    August 2016
    July 2016
    June 2016
    May 2016
    April 2016
    March 2016
    February 2016
    January 2016
    December 2015
    November 2015
    October 2015
    September 2015
    August 2015
    July 2015
    June 2015
    May 2015
    April 2015
    March 2015
    February 2015
    January 2015
    December 2014
    November 2014
    October 2014

Picture
Website by Platform 36