Autumn leaves soon carpet the ground
A kaleidoscope of colors
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A quick gust of wind
Autumn leaves soon carpet the ground A kaleidoscope of colors
Sandra James
24/9/2021 10:13:41 am
A lovely word picture, Marjan! Spring has sprung here in Australia but for a moment I was right there :)
Adrian McRobb
24/9/2021 10:46:25 am
I love Autumn, thank you
Marjan Sierhuis
24/9/2021 01:02:17 pm
🍁You are welcome, Adrian. It is also my favorite time of year. Thank you for reading.
Marjan Sierhuis
24/9/2021 01:00:06 pm
🇦🇺 🍂🍁Thank you, Sandra for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Marjan Sierhuis
24/9/2021 05:36:49 pm
Thank you, Jim for your kind words. Yes, a year long summer does sound quite nice.
Krystyna
24/9/2021 05:32:00 pm
A beautiful tribute to the start of autumn, Marjan.
Marjan Sierhuis
24/9/2021 05:37:47 pm
Thank you, Krystyna.
Sue Clayton
25/9/2021 02:30:34 am
What could be more beautiful than a carpet of golden-brown leaves. Rake them up and use them as mulch in garden beds.
Marjan Sierhuis
25/9/2021 03:44:01 am
Thank you, Sue for reading. I agree. Autumn leaves can be quite beautiful.
Padmini
25/9/2021 08:24:33 am
I find autumn beautiful too. But it is unfortunately alluded to old age in the poetic (especially haiku) world. Your poem was a visual treat, Marjan:)
Marjan Sierhuis
25/9/2021 12:55:58 pm
Thank you, Padmini for your kind words. Comments are closed.
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