By the babbling brook
with shut eyes, please listen closely
for happy chatter
with shut eyes, please listen closely
for happy chatter
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Krystyna
8/7/2022 02:17:56 pm
I’m listening, Marjan. I can feel the heartbeat of the brook. Lovely scene.
Marjan Sierhuis
8/7/2022 02:53:01 pm
Thank you, Krystyna for reading and taking a moment to comment. 8/7/2022 04:43:41 pm
It's nice to hear that chatter playing in harmony with the singing of nearby songbirds.
Padmini
8/7/2022 07:22:23 pm
I can visualize the musical chatter of the brook. Lovely, Marjan.
Marjan Sierhuis
8/7/2022 08:35:28 pm
Thank you Jim and Padmini for taking a minute to read my little poem. I enjoyed writing it.
Sue Clayton
9/7/2022 07:09:02 am
A babbling brook always brings joy to the listener.
marjan sierhuis
9/7/2022 10:11:38 pm
So true, Sue. Thank you for reading. Leave a Reply. |
PoetryThis is the section where fiction prose becomes something else. We still expect the poems to be short, though – sonnets, perhaps, or around that length at the very most. 
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