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FOOD Red lips quiver and her skin starts to shiver as her teeth bite into the succulent red flesh.
Taste buds tingle senses sing while juices flow down her chinny-chin-chin. She licks the juice off her fingers and closes her eyes while the moment lingers.
10 Comments
Marjan sierhuis
20/2/2021 05:15:59 pm
Thank you, Jim for taking the time to read and for your comment.
Sue Clayton
21/2/2021 01:53:16 am
A vampiric feast to be savoured, Marjan.
Marjan sierhuis
21/2/2021 04:23:17 pm
Thank you, Sue for your read.
Mary Wallace
23/2/2021 06:27:54 am
I was hoping the red flesh was watermelon rather than human. Loved the poem.
Marjan sierhuis
23/2/2021 10:27:36 am
Hi Mary. The red flesh is that of a fruit.. Flesh is how they describe the outer portion of a strawberry. I hope I didn't give readers the wrong impression.
Mary Wallace
25/2/2021 11:16:51 pm
Blame Sue. I was picturing delectable fruit with juices dripping down your chin and until Sue mentioned vampires.
Marjan sierhuis
26/2/2021 12:23:46 am
Hello Mary.
Padmini Krishnan
26/2/2021 09:20:22 am
Hi Marjan, The title made me think of vampires. But, the character wants a bite of a delicious fruit:) Good choice of words.
Marjan sierhuis
26/2/2021 11:52:52 am
Thank you, Padmini for your comment. Feedback always appreciated. Leave a Reply. |
PoetryThis is the section where fiction prose becomes something else. We still expect the poems to be short, though – sonnets, perhaps, or around that length at the very most. 
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