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Missing the Goal, by Sandra James

22/3/2022

 
My divorced friend hated football
but together we took our kids to the big game
she sat in the stands, head buried
in a War & Peace sized romantic tome
oblivious to cheering, and booing
around us
At the end of play I ran with the kids
onto the field
met players, collected autographs
while she finished her book
sighing as she closed the covers on the handsome hero

Who won? she asked, when we returned

Pity she never noticed the hunky referee
who gazed up from the sidelines
smitten
Angela Carlton link
23/3/2022 12:27:45 am

Very clever, entertaining and realistic!

Sandra James
23/3/2022 06:16:15 am

Thank you, Angela! Sometimes we can't see the forest for the trees 🙂

Sue Clayton
23/3/2022 04:09:53 am

Make sure she's taken to the next game and notices the smitten referee. Nice one, Sandra.

Sandra James
23/3/2022 06:20:29 am

Thanks, Sue! This lady does exist although I've lost contact with her now. She really did read all through the football while her two and three of mine cheered along with me and ran onto the field afterwards to meet the players 😉

Greg Vander-Haeghen
23/3/2022 08:28:20 am

I can really relate to buying my head into a book while oblivious to the 'circus' around me. Well-done Sandra.

Sandra James
23/3/2022 11:07:20 am

Thanks, Greg! While I love our Aussie Rules football, there are a lot of other sports, and 'circuses', that I could happily read through, too. I was amazed one day to see my friend pick up a book she was halfway through reading and continue reading while she waited for the traffic lights to change - those behind her were not impressed when she didn't see them change and kept on reading 😮

Padmini
24/3/2022 07:11:07 am

I can understand somebody being glued to a book in the midst of an uninteresting game:) This was an interesting poem, Sandra. so well done.

Sandra James
24/3/2022 08:58:31 am

Thanks, Padmini. There are few sports I would happily read through, too. And, some I'd happily do housework instead of watching!

Dee Lorraine
25/3/2022 04:43:38 am

Wow, she missed the catch of the day. Well done, Sandra.

Jim Bartlett link
25/3/2022 03:10:15 pm

Smile!
Jim

Candace Arthuria Williams
26/3/2022 03:46:51 pm

I can totally relate to your friend, but I've been afraid to admit it until now. Perhaps she wasn't looking for a hunk. She had a love for words. As do I.


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