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The Pitch (A Constanza), by Krystyna Fedosejevs

19/3/2022

 
‘Twas a match for sports hall of fame.
Made possible by one hitter
Able to trick every pitcher.

His points added up perfectly.
The number of runs for home plate.
Batting no one could understate.

Game ended, interviews followed.
He went on signing autographs
For all holding his photographs.

Someone was struck by what she saw.
How skillfully he swung his bat,
With good form; all muscle, no fat.

She admired him with all her heart.
If only he’d be her lover
Instead of her famous father.

Marjan Sierhuis
19/3/2022 12:20:06 pm

I feel I'm there in the stands. Wonderful poem, Krystyna.

Jennifer Duncan
19/3/2022 12:34:27 pm

Great description. What a twist at the end !

Krystyna
19/3/2022 02:51:29 pm

Thank you Marjan and Jennifer for reading and liking my poem.

Sue Clayton
20/3/2022 06:56:30 am

Wishing he was her lover, not her father. Hmmm. Stirs the imagination, Marjan.

Krystyna
20/3/2022 08:34:59 am

Dear Sue, I think you mean Krystyna, not Marjan. Thanks for commenting.
Yes, there is such a phenomenon in the sphere of psychology, the Electra Complex. Put simply, young daughter overly fascinated with her father.
However, my poem was not intended to go there. The reference I made was to imply that perhaps the daughter’s lover wasn’t as athletic as her father, and not as famous.

Sue Clayton
21/3/2022 12:58:41 am

Oops, sorry Krystyna. Reference now understood. Whichever way I read it, it was a good poem that I enjoyed. Cheers, Sue.

Padmini
24/3/2022 08:40:13 am

Effortless rhyming, Krystyna, and a beautiful poem.

Krystyna
25/3/2022 09:11:08 am

Thank you, Padmini.


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