He blows his whistle
the crowd yells their approval
A smile crinkles eyes
the crowd yells their approval
A smile crinkles eyes
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Sandra James
19/3/2022 08:29:12 pm
Well done, Marjan!
marjan sierhuis
19/3/2022 08:38:36 pm
Thank you, Sandra.
Krystyna
19/3/2022 10:47:20 pm
Simply beautiful, Marjan.
Marjan Sierhuis
20/3/2022 11:23:22 am
Thank you, Krystyna for your kind words. I am pleaaed you enjoyed it.
Lorraine Murphy
19/3/2022 11:24:46 pm
Beautiful 💟
Marjan Sierhuis
20/3/2022 11:24:19 am
Thank you, Lorraine.
David Ngo
20/3/2022 05:37:12 am
Very well done haiku. Love it Marjan.
Marjan Sierhuis
20/3/2022 11:25:44 am
Thank you, David for reading and your comment.
Sue Clayton
20/3/2022 06:51:10 am
This time he made the right call. Next time he might be frowning as the crowd yells out catcalls.
Marjan Sierhuis
20/3/2022 01:32:28 pm
Thank you, Sue for reading my story.
marjan sierhuis
20/3/2022 06:45:05 pm
Dear Writer
Padmini
24/3/2022 08:36:40 am
The crowd has acknowledged his effort. Lovely haiku, Marjan
Marjan Sierhuis
24/3/2022 10:20:57 am
Thank you, Padmini for your kind words.
Marjan Sierhuis
25/3/2022 08:46:00 pm
Thank you, Jim. I am pleased you had an opportunity to read it. Comments are closed.
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PoetryThis is the section where fiction prose becomes something else. We still expect the poems to be short, though – sonnets, perhaps, or around that length at the very most. Please feel free to comment (nicely!) on any poems – writers appreciate it.
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