Under the Sun, by Andrew Carter

27/2/2021

TRAVEL

ultraviolet

light navigation system –

bee under the sun

Sandra James

27/2/2021 09:57:25 pm

Wonderful, Andrew. Good things come in small packages and say it all!

Andrew Carter

28/2/2021 01:49:56 am

Thanks, Sandra. Our bees are so important. And your comments are always well-considered and helpful.

Mary Wallace

28/2/2021 12:57:53 am

Loved this Andrew.

Andrew Carter

28/2/2021 02:00:08 am

Thanks, Mary. Bees are fascinating creatures, and so too the haiku form. Bees are little dynamos in need of our care, and I'[m glad you enjoyed this haiku. Funnily enough, it came to me just last night after reading Gordon's funny one. I guess this one can come under the banners of both food and travel.

Sue Clayton

28/2/2021 01:36:05 am

Bee-autiful haiku, Andrew.

Andrew Carter

28/2/2021 02:12:47 am

Beehave, Sue. Yes, I feel like waxing lyrical about this one. I was abuzz with excitement when this one came to my hive mind after beeing pollinated by reading other writer's pieces;
"The flowers are full of honey, but only the bee finds out the sweetness."
... I'll buzz off now.

marjan sierhuis

28/2/2021 03:41:04 pm

Well done, Andrew. You captured a moment in time extremely well. Have a good day.

Andrew Carter

1/3/2021 04:30:43 pm

Thanks, Marjan. I get a bit over-excitable about these haiku.

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