a pair of ragged sandals
waiting by the door
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Old hut near the sea
a pair of ragged sandals waiting by the door
Cindy Patrick
4/11/2022 10:47:03 pm
I want to go to there. Even if it's just to peek inside...
Robert P. Bishop
5/11/2022 03:50:24 am
Hi Cindy...thanks for reading and commenting. Yes, it is an interesting hut...lots of dreams in there.
Robert P. Bishop
5/11/2022 03:59:25 am
Hi Cindy...thanks for reading and for the interesting remark. (I responded, earlier but my post didn't appear. I hope I didn't make some horrible grammatical error which nixed it). I'm glad you liked the poem. 4/11/2022 11:29:39 pm
Really nice imagery here, Robert. A painted hut by a beautiful sea, those old sandals just sitting outside the door.
Robert P. Bishop
5/11/2022 03:52:33 am
Hi Jim...thanks for reading and for the kind remark. The old hut, waiting for the owner of those sandals to appear.
Mimi Grouse
5/11/2022 03:18:59 am
Another little masterpiece! Well done, Robert.
Robert P. Bishop
5/11/2022 03:54:32 am
Hi Mimi...thanks for reading and for the kind remark. I hope you enjoyed the poem.
Mimi Grouse
5/11/2022 05:00:33 am
Yes, I did, very much.
Marjan Sierhuis
6/11/2022 10:45:17 am
So few words but so much meaning.
Robert P. Bishop
9/11/2022 04:05:23 am
Thanks, Marjan, for reading and for the kind remark. I hope you enjoyed the poem.
Sue Clayton
8/11/2022 04:53:21 am
Imagery that invokes the senses.
Robert P. Bishop
9/11/2022 04:06:31 am
Thanks, Sue, for reading and for the kind comment.
Krystyna
10/11/2022 11:12:11 pm
Vivid imagery. A setting that can pull one in different directions with a storyline. Well done, Robert.
Rashna Tessa Walton
11/11/2022 09:45:59 am
Lovely haiku. So much suggested in so few words. Comments are closed.
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