I softly tear the pieces apart, enjoying the sensation on my fingertips as they yield. Slowly strip the excess, gauzy pith away. Slide one, two, three pieces onto my tongue. Bite down and feel the citrus tang spray against the inside of my cheek, the back of my teeth. I offer you a segment, as you stare at me. Disgust knots itself in the curl of upper lip. Your packed bags waiting silently in the hall.
William George Sells
28/5/2021 12:23:16 pm
Yum. This was SO good. Well apportioned!
Elaine M.
31/5/2021 01:09:14 am
Thank you!
Pamela Kennedy
28/5/2021 01:03:01 pm
Yummy! I can taste those oranges slices right now.
Elaine M.
31/5/2021 01:09:38 am
Thanks for reading, Pamela :)
Susan F. Reid
28/5/2021 01:44:02 pm
Elaine,
Elaine M.
31/5/2021 01:09:54 am
Thanks, Susan!
Krystyna
28/5/2021 03:33:01 pm
The one who’s packed can go! No need for another person to enjoy a divine moment. Well presented, Elaine.
Elaine M.
31/5/2021 01:10:13 am
Thank you, Krystyna :)
Sue Clayton
29/5/2021 03:07:53 am
A sexual overtone to this farewell but the pleasure is all hers, none left over for him.
Elaine M.
31/5/2021 01:10:36 am
Thanks for reading, Sue :)
Brian
29/5/2021 07:31:03 pm
So good.
Elaine M.
31/5/2021 01:10:52 am
Thanks, Brian :)
Mary Wallace
29/5/2021 08:30:56 pm
This was excellently done Elaine. Beautifully written.
Elaine M.
31/5/2021 01:11:10 am
Thank you so much, Mary :) Comments are closed.
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