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The Parting Present, by Sivan Pillai

24/11/2023

 
"This guy was a wanted thief, dodging us for some time. Though he’s breathing, he's unconscious. We've called an ambulance. He appears to have come to break into the house, but the coconut that fell on his head must have put a spanner in his plan".
Being almost a hundred feet tall, I could not clearly hear what the onlookers were saying but saw a police jeep and some people standing around a prostrate figure.
The morning sky was clear, and the bright sunlight dried the ground fast. The night was dark and tumultuous, with a strong wind accompanied by flashes of lightning and heavy rains. Some branches of nearby trees had been broken and carried away by the wind. The dry leaves hanging from my top had already fallen. A couple of dry coconuts clinging to me had lost their grip and dropped to the ground one after another.
Thank God my last morning was bright and clear. Not that I blame the owners for their decision. I had expected it even when the foundation stone was laid for the house many years ago. I was then only about eight years old and healthy, carrying bunches of young coconuts fast becoming ripe. The priest who had come for the function had questioned the wisdom of keeping me so close to the house, but the owner had, perhaps respecting the appeal by the youngsters, promised him I would be cut down the moment I became a source of danger. Now that I had become very tall and was leaning dangerously towards the house, everybody thought even a breeze could make me fall over the house.
I had seen three generations growing up. After years of studies, some left the house when they got jobs, and some went away after their marriage. The new generation had spent less time under me. They looked too busy with modern devices like smartphones and laptops.
Some, old and young, had died. My tender coconuts were favourites of all, and the traditional tree climber who came every month carrying a long and heavy bamboo ladder had plucked them for them. Years later, he said it was better to let the few coconuts I bore now and then fall when they became dry instead of climbing the tall and dangerously leaning tree for them.
I saw some people approaching, carrying a roll of thick rope and other accessories required to cut down a tall tree.
My executioners.
​

The Conversation, by Don Tassone

24/11/2023

 
Andrew awoke and, for the first time in a long time, felt no pain. In fact, he couldn’t feel his body at all. He opened his eyes and looked down, but his body wasn’t there.

He looked around. Everything was white. Nothing had form. This isn’t hospice, he thought.

He heard a voice.

“Hello, Andrew.”

The voice was warm. It was neither male nor female. He couldn't place it, yet it seemed familiar.

“Hello?” Andrew said.

Then he realized the owner of the voice was very close, though Andrew could see no one.

“Where am I?” he said.

“Where you’ve always been.”

“But I don’t know this place.”

“You did once, before you were born. You lived a long life. At first, it can be hard to remember.”

“Who are you?”

“You know me. You’ve always known me.”

“Refresh my memory.”

“Ha, ha.”

“I’m serious.”

“I know. But you do make me laugh.”

“That’s good. At least I hope it is.”

“It’s very good. When you laugh, you put aside your cares. I love that.”

“But I worried a lot.”

“A whole lot.”

“Did you still love me then?”

“I’ve always loved you.”

“Can I ask you something?”

“Sure.”

“How did I do?”

“Wonderfully.”

“Come on. Really.”

“You did the best you could.”

“But I could have done better.”

“What do you mean?”

“I wasn’t a great father. I wasn’t a great husband.”

“Why do you say that?”

“Well, I wasn’t very dutiful.”

“Is that what it means to be a good father or a good husband?”

“But I should have been there more.”

“You loved them, and they loved you. That is enough.”

“Really?”

“Yes.”

“But I haven’t always been faithful.”

“I know.”

“Oh, yeah,” Andrew said, feeling a bit self-conscious, even though he could no longer see himself.

“You think you failed, but I’ve always been with you, and I would never let you fail.”

“I didn’t achieve much, though.”

“Did you use your talent?”

“I tried.”

“That too is enough.”

“Well, I drank too much.”

“Yes, you did.”

“And I didn’t go to church much.”

“I noticed.”

“I shot a bird with a BB gun when I was a kid.”

“I know.”

“I killed the poor thing!”

“I know. I wept.”

“I’m sorry. That was wrong.”

“You were learning. Besides, I forgave you.”

Andrew thought for a moment.

“You mean none of the bad things I did in my life really mattered?”

“How did those things make you feel?”

“Bad.”

“Why?”

“Well, I guess I felt I had disappointed ... you know.”

“God?”

“Yeah.”

“But, Andrew, you are one with God.”

“I am now.”

“You always have been.”

“Really?”

“Yes.”

“I wish I’d known that.”

“You did.”

“When?”

“Whenever you loved someone or felt loved.”

“Those were good moments.”

“And they were just glimpses of what’s to come.”

“You mean there’s more than this?”

“Oh, yes. This has just been a conversation to get reacquainted. Would you like to see the rest?”

“Yeah.”

“Let me show you.”

Field Trip, by John O’Keefe

24/11/2023

 
“This is gonna be exciting, lieutenant, and I bet they don’t teach it in the military academy. The kinda real action you can only learn in the trenches.”

“Yes, sir.”

“Watch now: Wild West in the East. Sergeant Balik’s climbing up the roof and covering the chimney with his coat. As you can tell already, the idea is that the old rickety farmhouse’s gonna be filled up with smoke. Pretty slick, ain’t it?”

“Yes, sir.”

“Now the enemy’s got two choices. If they stay inside, they’re gonna suffocate to death. If they run out of the house, we’re gonna have a turkey shoot.”

“Yes, sir.”

“The beauty of it, of course, is that I ain’t gonna lose a single one of my guys. When I lead men into battle my primary goal is to keep them alive. That’s utmost importance to any commander worthy of his rank. Unfortunately it doesn’t always work out that way; we do lose soldiers, and quite frequently. Every casualty on our side is a devastating loss even if we finish off the enemy to their last man.”

“Yes, sir.”

“Any questions, lieutenant?”

“Yes, sir, I do. What about civilians? What if there are civilians in the farmhouse with the enemy?”

“Civilians? You mean innocent victims, right? That kinda talk is for politicians, chickenshit reporters and blasé pacifists. As far as I am concerned, only completely disabled elderly members of the enemy are worth keeping alive. They can do no harm to us and at the same time they are a big burden on their society. I especially love the geezers with severe arthritis in their hands. They can’t pick up a spoon, much less pull the trigger.”

“Yes, sir.”

“Women, you ask? The gentler sex, those foxy, celestial creatures we go nuts about, and rightfully so in peacetime? The answer is no. Forget radiant dames, forget cheerleaders. Women are not only enemy, each one of them is many enemy. Think about it, in childbearing age every broad can potentially produce several hostile babies. And those babies are gonna suck more and more venom into themselves with the mother’s milk.

“Yes, sir.”

And how about them toddlers and teenagers, you also ask? Well, let me clue you in on kids. They are guaranteed future enemy. After witnessing what’s happened to their people, they’ll grow up with hate in their hearts and become even more ferocious sons of the bitches than their fathers and uncles ever were.”

“Yes, sir.”

“Alright, lieutenant, enough of talking philosophy; seems they’re ready to break out of the house. Their lungs and eyes drenched in smoke, they’re gonna be disoriented; the easiest targets. Shoot midriff, and stay covered. It would be a personal tragedy to me if you got hurt. Since the beginning of the campaign I’ve lost three soldiers. I’ll remember their faces and names till the day I die.”
​

On Seeing Past the Nose on One's Face, by Tony Covatta

17/11/2023

 
Four girlfriends in the bar at a destination wedding, The ceremony took place at noon. They were killing time before the evening dinner-reception. Their friendships formed years ago, when they had lived at Fosdick Falls, home of an upscale New England college. Each had moved away. They were filling the gaps distance and years had created.
The venue prompted marriage as a likely topic. Each had left her spouse of the Fosdick Falls days. Philosophical Vicki led off: “When did you realize you were headed for divorce?”
Sandra wouldn’t play: “I hate these games. I’m going upstairs.” As she left the table she shot back, “Tom couldn’t see past the nose on his face.”
Undaunted, Vicki insisted on sticking to the theme. “Well, my honey Stuart couldn’t see himself. He hated teaching and did everything he could to wreck his career. One afternoon I found him asleep in his home office, skipping class. Word got back quickly—it always did so—he had left a note on the board: ‘Class cancelled due to circumstances.’ I realized right then that his joke hid the truth. His whole life, including me, was a circumstance he couldn’t endure.”
“That would have been too subtle for me,” said Kate. “ One night, Maury came home from the hospital. He had been fired as Director of Medicine. I was shocked. ‘Why?’ I demanded. He hemmed and hawed, hiding something. Eventually I dragged it out. Security had caught him screwing a nurse in an empty patient room. The same nurse he always talked to at our parties and at staff picnics.”
Frances stifled a polite laugh. “Sorry about Maury. At least you were playing on the same team. When Fred brought a ‘needy’ teenager home from the shelter on weekends, I was sympathetic at first. Then I caught Fred’s unguarded gaze at that beautiful boy. I’d been hiding from myself. Our marriage already had problems. Now I knew I was fighting something I couldn’t beat.”
“Let’s get back to Sandra,” insisted vindictive Vicki. “Why was she so huffy? How did Tom discover her ‘workouts’ with the college tennis coach?”
“It wasn’t that simple,” Kate exclaimed. “Don’t you remember the Halloween party when Tom showed up in a nose costume? He worked on that papier mache, skin-color, nose-shaped shell for months, insisting Sandra pose as a handkerchief. When Tom appeared in it, bobbing and weaving, everyone was amazed—for maybe ten seconds. Humiliated, Sandra waved the sheet-handkerchief around once, then fled with the bored group. Tom looked bewildered, peering out the eyeholes. He couldn’t understand his sight joke’s failure. Sandra had predicted it would be a bust, but single-minded Tom couldn’t ever listen to her. She was sick of him. Then the coach appeared.”
“You really think so?” asked Frances. “She didn’t love the coach, only shortsighted Tom. She gambled that jealousy would drive Tom to change. But snotty Tom couldn’t get over the coach. He couldn’t see past the nose on his face. Neither could she.”

The Opaque Window, by Leigh-Anne Burley

17/11/2023

 
Danny's chest squeezes in a vise grip, and he clutches onto the seat, resisting the sensation that an alien force is dragging him out of the window. He listens to his hammering heart as he stares out the halfway-open school bus window, smelling the exhaust. Closing his eyes, the frightened boy takes a deep breath to calm himself but knows impending doom is coming. Jake, his best friend, sees Danny's distress and asks if he's okay. When Danny doesn't respond, Jake nudges him, repeating his question.

Danny speaks, his voice strained. "I'm fine," he says, but his words sound hollow.

Seeing the fear in his friend’s eyes and the tension in his body, Jake asks, "What's the matter?"

Danny opens his eyes and recalls when he and Jake stole apples from old Lady Hendrix's orchard. He got stuck under the fence and panicked; Jake yanked him out. The memory offers him a brief sense of ease.

"I feel like I'm suffocating," Danny says, shifting in his seat. "It's like I can't escape."

Leaning forward, Jake asks, "What do you mean?"

"I don't know, but something terrible will happen."

"Tomorrow will be another boring school day," Jake reassures him.

Fear enveloped Danny that night as he hid under a blanket, escaping the howling wind and his parents' fierce arguing. There's a loud crash, and the front door slams shut. His mother sobs herself to sleep as darkness creeps around the boy through the staring window.

In the morning, Danny observes his mother's red-rimmed eyes, messy chestnut brown hair, and broken glass swept into a corner.
"Danny, your father left us late last night and isn't coming back," his mother, Barb, tells him as she holds him close.
"Where did he go?"
"I don’t know where Frank went. He said not to contact him. Your father wants his own life apart from us."
“Your lying. My dad won’t do that!”
Breaking the news to her nine-year-old son about his father starting another family was unbearable for her.
"It's not your fault, Danny. You did nothing to cause your father to leave and can't bring him back. From now on, it’s the two of us, and we’ll be fine."
Danny tears up as his mother says, “Finish your breakfast, and I’ll call the school to say you’re not feeling well.”
Barb boxes up the rest of Frank’s belongings and takes them to a charity. At the kitchen table, the abandoned wife lights cigarettes and searches for jobs in the want ads, ignoring the dripping kitchen faucet. She will have to sell their two-story house with the peeling paint.
Danny wonders who will toss the ball with him in the backyard and watch his games while his mind fogs over and his insides shake. He dreams about his father’s bulky frame ripped through the hungry window and worries he will be the next target. Willing himself invisible, the diminished boy returns to school, clutching his lucky rabbit's foot.

November 1st, by John O’Keefe

3/11/2023

 
“This kind of thing can spread,” he would tell us, “wars don’t recognize borders.” We soon stopped paying attention to his warnings even though some of the worst battles were fought barely fifty miles north of us. It was gradually becoming trench warfare anyway; curling (sport?) seemed more exciting.

It was on a lazy mid-August day when we got the news that a stray cluster bomb had maimed his daughter-in-law and killed Tommy, his only grandchild. We didn’t know how to tell him but soon he found out anyway. He refused to go to the funeral and has not visited his daughter-in-law in the sanatorium.

Today, All Saints’s Day, we’re getting ready to visit the graves of the loved ones. He says he’s not coming. “As long as I see no evidence, I can believe that Tommy is still alive. He’ll grow up to be twice the man I ever was. And he’ll become a poet or a park ranger or a peace activist. A fierce one!”
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