Aware that her husband is hard at hearing, she likes to whisper to the numbskull and leaves inaudible messages on his phone, especially if really important. Aware that his wife of seven years has OCD, he is still annoyed to no end when the crazy nag screams into his hearing aid: why is water in the kitchen sink again?! |
Gretchen VanOstrand
1/12/2023 03:55:56 pm
Nice one. I enjoyed this.
John O’Keefe
1/12/2023 11:00:44 pm
Frankly, I wanted to have a little fun with the woke people but decided Christmas is coming so let’s be nice. Starting January, no holds barred.
Sandra James
12/1/2024 09:50:39 am
What a happy couple! I like the way you've written it with the repetition of 'aware'. Works well. Comments are closed.
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