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fast clock ticking sound
windows fail to stop traffic bulbs need replacement when the mind is empty space ideas flying in the air
Sue Clayton
19/2/2022 01:42:01 am
Nothing like a clear mind to set free imagination.
David Ngo
19/2/2022 05:54:25 am
So true Sue. They're just like butterfly. Many thanks for your thoughts. 19/2/2022 04:11:58 pm
I catch a sort of juxtaposition here between the first lines and the last. Indeed when the mind is an empty space, ideas do magically appear. But when the noise from the traffic outside, along with call of chores needing attention seem to clutter the air, the mind is a wall, the thoughts and creativeness trapped within.
David Ngo
20/2/2022 01:24:30 am
Absolutely, Jim. Great insight, enhancement, extension. 'the mind is a wall' 'thoughts trapped within' I like it. Many thanks Comments are closed.
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PoetryThis is the section where fiction prose becomes something else. We still expect the poems to be short, though – sonnets, perhaps, or around that length at the very most. 
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