a purple flower peeks out
the blush of summer
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from a cluttered pot
a purple flower peeks out the blush of summer
Mary Wallace
2/7/2021 09:06:58 am
Lovely Padmini I warm to its blush.
Padmini Krishnan
2/7/2021 11:50:00 am
Thank you, Mary. I am happy you liked this:)
Padmini Krishnan
3/7/2021 01:16:50 am
Thank you so much, Jim. Usually, I like to write haiku and three-line poetry.
Marjan Sierhuis
3/7/2021 02:32:19 am
🪴🌝A lovely haiku, Padmini.
Padmini Krishnan
3/7/2021 07:03:55 am
Thanks a lot, Marjan
Adrian McRobb
3/7/2021 11:49:17 am
Great stuff, I love tiny poetry, I have tried in the past some really short ones.
Padmini Krishnan
3/7/2021 11:53:15 am
Yes, you are right. We need to find the right words that make an impact. Sometimes we succeed. Thanks a lot, Adrian, for reading and commenting.
Sue Clayton
6/7/2021 06:50:25 am
Beautiful haiku, Padmini.
Padmini Krishnan
6/7/2021 07:01:31 am
Thank you, Sue:) Comments are closed.
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PoetryThis is the section where fiction prose becomes something else. We still expect the poems to be short, though – sonnets, perhaps, or around that length at the very most. Archives
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