words blend and caress
then tango across the page;
I need new glasses
then tango across the page;
I need new glasses
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Sue Clayton
24/6/2023 07:21:54 am
But what a dance those words performed.
K. J. Watson
24/6/2023 08:58:10 am
Thank you very much for your feedback, Sue. Much appreciated.
Sandra James
24/6/2023 09:46:52 am
Yes, I'm definitely due for new glasses, too. But, I'll enjoy the dance in the meantime. Thanks for the new perspective - great poem!
K. J. Watson
24/6/2023 11:37:18 am
Thank you, Sandra, for your kind comments.
John O’Keefe
28/6/2023 11:22:56 am
Those of us who just found we need the positive diopter can relate to this. KJ should consider developing into an ode. Example:
K. J. Watson
28/6/2023 12:39:38 pm
Many thanks for your comment, John. The Pablo Neruda poem is excellent. Comments are closed.
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PoetryThis is the section where fiction prose becomes something else. We still expect the poems to be short, though – sonnets, perhaps, or around that length at the very most. Please feel free to comment (nicely!) on any poems – writers appreciate it.
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