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Dear You, by Angela Carlton

6/10/2023

 
I am caught up in the silence, your web, those promises, each one wicked. As I lay in silk with you, trembling, bare, cold, but warm from your sweat and the heat in your eyes, I think maybe this one time, I will reach you. Maybe this time you won’t hide. You won’t run. But somebody always leaves, don't they? And what are we left with nothing but empty space.

Jaded, no rest, weary, still you come crawling back, hanging round my door. Again, I am stripped down, floating under silk sheets, the full moon glaring like one massive eye outside my window, only this time, I’m left shivering. There is too much silence here. Where are you? Where?
I need to know.

And, on this evening, a harrowing Sunday, I finally break, “I need to quit,” I whisper, as I stumble and drift in the dark, fishing for all the scattered pieces, the parts that might make me whole.
Mimi Grouse
6/10/2023 01:13:41 pm

This is great! Well done!

Angela Carlton link
6/10/2023 01:23:40 pm

Thank you, Mimi. You continue to INSPIRE me!

Ashley Smallwood
6/10/2023 09:40:11 pm

Leaves you wondering what's going to happen next? Seems like the beginning of more stories... Keep up the good work!!

Prentice Tompkins
7/10/2023 12:21:36 am

That’s a short story that leaves me wanting more; complete in its own right, but ripe with the potential for expansion…

Jimmy Shane
7/10/2023 12:23:44 am

Sounds amazing!! Look forward to it!

Christa Loughrey
7/10/2023 05:07:38 pm

Yep - I want the sequel too.

Jim Bartlett link
8/10/2023 05:01:40 am

Your quest to leave us hanging. Wondering. Rereading one more time - surely we missed a clue. Something must be there that tells us what (with just a few more chapters) will happen. Has been quite successful to this point.
Another nice one, Angela
Jim

david milner
8/10/2023 11:33:52 am

Prequels, sequels 'your web, those promises, each one wicked.' says ii all, but I could be wrong.

Natalie
8/10/2023 10:38:39 pm

Wow…very intriguing and what a powerful story line. As others said above, would love to know what happens next?!

Brook
9/10/2023 02:52:59 pm

I enjoyed this story more than the other because the mood was so intense. I felt so involved in this story. The moon outside my window glaring like an eye was great as usual. I hope your next story continues this one.


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