We're miles and miles apart, aren’t we?? But when the rain hits my rooftop in the wee hours. I’m awakened. I remember your smooth humor, that soft, southern voice that hits me like a whisper on my neck. I remember those boyish eyes. It holds me deep in the night for a while until reality sets in. I think about my mother who just stares at the ceiling in a ratty bathrobe like she might find the answers there. I think of my sister who has slipped into a coma, the beauty, sleeping, one you don’t touch, like a forgotten doll in a closet. The rain’s pounding-pounding now and the storm’s setting in, swirling, moving fast like the rhythm of my heart. In the end, I’m just a lost girl in the dark who clings to hope and that one shot at love until I fade into a beautiful colorless dream that may or may not come true.
Mary Wallace
9/7/2021 09:33:54 am
Angela your stories are both sad and beautiful. 9/7/2021 01:50:31 pm
Thank you Mary, a line from one of my favorite writers is..."Show me a person who hasn't known any sorrow and I'll show you a superficial." ~ ~Tennesse Williams
Brook
9/7/2021 04:24:46 pm
Your heart and your dreams so far apart but maybe they can connect together through hope. Hope is what keeps us going and you have shown us how. Picture perfect.
Pamela Kennedy
9/7/2021 06:49:18 pm
So beautifully written...
Natalie
9/7/2021 09:28:37 pm
Love this one 💜 you have such a way with bringing the words to life.
Ashley Smallwood
9/7/2021 11:26:00 pm
Very good as always! I can feel what the character is going through. Keep up the good work!
Sivan Pillai
10/7/2021 06:14:35 am
A touching story, Anjela.
Sue Clayton
10/7/2021 07:40:55 am
I hope the soft, southern voice can whisper to her of love and make her dream become a reality far away from that which haunts her mother and sister. Comments are closed.
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