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Love One Another, by Doug Bartlett

8/1/2021

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John sat in a darkened room as he waited for his escort to arrive. He reminisced back to a period of time when he was younger, much younger, over half a century younger.John sat there thinking of all he had been privileged to experience in his lifetime. He was the youngest of the original followers of Jesus Christ. He felt honored and blessed because of that.

However, sometimes he felt guilty because all the other apostles, his friends, had been martyred, dying a violent death. He was now in his eighties and was the last surviving apostle. He knew how important it was to continue to share with others the lessons he had learned from Jesus.

A group of people that shared the island of Patmos with John realized how significant it was to sit under John’s tutelage. They knew he was the last living apostle and no telling how much longer he would be around. Jesus loved all his apostles but for some reason John got the reputation of being called the “apostle Jesus loved".

The people were honored to have John speak at their meetings. They were followers of Jesus and to think of having John, an original apostle, in their midst. Someone who personally saw Jesus, talked with him, ate with him, lived with him and saw miraculous signs performed by him was almost unbelievable for them to take in.

John’s escort arrived and as they departed they struck up a conversation as they walked to the meeting.

“You know John, we all appreciate you and the relationship you have with our Lord, but we’ve noticed all you talk about, week after week, is loving each other. Do you think you could move on to something else?”

“I’d love to. As soon as you guys get it and start putting it into practice, I’ll be glad to move on.”

Here it is two-thousand years later and we still haven’t “gotten it”.

“This is my command, love one another.” John 15:17
16 Comments
Mike B
8/1/2021 06:35:53 pm

A Great message for us all today!!!
Thanks Doug!!

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Doug
8/1/2021 07:36:32 pm

Thanks Mike. Glad you enjoyed it.

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phyllis souza
8/1/2021 06:49:14 pm

Wonderful story. Somehow I think the message of love is lost. The world needs another miracle!

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Doug
8/1/2021 07:35:25 pm

Thank you Phyllis. We can always use more love.

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Jim link
8/1/2021 07:23:37 pm

All You Need Is Love...
(The Beatles, and, I guess this guy as well ;-)

Jim

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Doug
8/1/2021 07:32:21 pm

Thanks Jim.

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Candace Arthuria Williams
9/1/2021 09:11:20 pm

Amen.

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Doug
9/1/2021 09:44:14 pm

Thank you Candace. Your one word comment seems to say it all.

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Mary Wallace
9/1/2021 10:46:41 pm

Love is patient and kind....seeks not its own way. We need this lesson more each day. Thankyou Doug.

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Doug
9/1/2021 11:09:08 pm

I couldn't agree with you more Mary. Thank you.

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Chuck Anderson
10/1/2021 03:25:56 am

Sadly, 2021 is proving we still don't get it.

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Doug
10/1/2021 04:13:56 am

Yes, but maybe someday.

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Sue Clayton
11/1/2021 07:04:00 am

Love is where you find it and so many around the world are still looking. Guess John won't be moving on any time soon.

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Doug
11/1/2021 06:48:22 pm

And I wonder of all the things we are missing because we do not have this one. Thank you Sue.

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Mike u
11/1/2021 03:29:05 pm

Great message Doug! Still not even in today’s society, unfortunately!

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Doug
11/1/2021 06:50:09 pm

Glad you enjoyed it Mike. Thanks for your comment.

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