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Mr. Anderson's Secret, by Doug Bartlett

16/6/2023

 
Seven years ago Mrs. Anderson had passed away leaving Mr. Anderson to live alone in the same house. Six months ago he had created a bond with a small group of nine-year old boys.

He met once a week with these boys for refreshments and to study the Bible. Mr. Anderson had a wonderful gift, as he could make the written Word come to life. He instilled in them the importance of not just reading and studying these Biblical principles, but to put them into practice, which would make them and the world a better place to live. That could be challenging for the boys . For example, after reading about loving their enemies”, Mr. Anderson had them put that into practice with some other boys who were bullying them. That may have been the hardest lesson they had to learn.

There was another elderly gentleman, Mr. Jones, that lived across the street and a few doors down. He had been in a car accident in the past and was slightly crippled. He wasn’t able to take care of his yard and it showed. Mr. Anderson got the boys to mow his lawn and Mr. Anderson paid them, with one stipulation, they could not tell Mr. Jones who was paying them.

The boys viewed Mr. Jones as a cranky, old curmudgeon. Whenever the boys would go over to mow his lawn he would come out on the front porch and try to run them off, to no avail. He then would try to discover who was paying them, but the boys were tight-lipped.

Two and a half years later Mr. Anderson passed away. The boys were very grateful for the time they had spent with him and the influence he had upon them. They took it hard at his passing and they were stunned when one of their mothers told them the story about Mr. Anderson and Mr. Jones. You see, that night several years ago when Mrs. Anderson had died, it was in a car accident. She was hit by another car and killed. That driver who killed her was in a drunken stupor at the time.His name was Mr. Jones.
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Gregory Hanger
16/6/2023 01:37:30 pm

Great story, Doug

Thanks for the lesson

Doug
16/6/2023 04:49:25 pm

Thank you Gregory.

Jim Bartlett link
16/6/2023 03:50:06 pm

Wow - didn't see that one coming. Nice story.

Jim

Doug
16/6/2023 04:50:18 pm

Thanks Jim.

Michael Borjon
16/6/2023 05:10:09 pm

Wow!!! Surprise ending Doug…
I’m sure the boys admired Mr Anderson even more when they found out how he taught them by example…
Great story!!!

Doug
16/6/2023 05:28:07 pm

Thank you Michael. Yes, I think more is caught than taught.

Mike U
16/6/2023 05:54:55 pm

A great reminder that forgiveness is for yourself, not for others!

Doug
16/6/2023 07:42:46 pm

Yes, forgiveness is a wonderful thing.

Marjan Sierhuis
17/6/2023 05:46:11 pm

A wonderful story, Doug.

Doug
17/6/2023 06:13:16 pm

Thank you for your comment Marjan.

Dee Lorraine
17/6/2023 06:39:15 pm

What a wonderful lesson about love and forgiveness, Doug. The ending is perfect.

Doug
17/6/2023 10:16:08 pm

Thank you so much Dee. I really appreciate it.


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