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New Neighbor, by Don Tassone

24/2/2023

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Linda Williams turned off her TV. Another fatal shooting involving an illegal immigrant. It had taken place 50 miles away, but the news still put Linda on edge. Illegals seemed to be everywhere these days.

Linda lived alone. She had a home security system but still felt vulnerable. Her neighborhood had been idyllic when she and her late husband Jim raised their kids. Now there were all kinds of people living there.

Just a few weeks earlier, a strange-looking family had moved in two doors down. Linda hadn’t met them, but she could tell they were immigrants by the way they dressed. Maybe they too were illegals, she thought.

It was a warm, sunny morning, and Linda decided to take a walk. She put on a wide brim hat, locked her front door and headed out.

Walking down the sidewalk, she came upon a young woman and a little girl kicking a ball back and forth in the front yard of the new neighbors’ house.

“Good morning,” the young woman said.

Linda said nothing. The woman just smiled and kicked the ball to the girl, but it bounced by her. It rolled between two parked cars and into the street. The girl ran after it.

“Layla!” the woman screamed.

Linda saw a car coming. She bolted after the child, who started to squeeze through the parked cars. Linda grabbed her by the shirt and yanked her back. They both fell backward into the grass.

The young woman hurried over, dropped to her knees and gathered the girl in. The woman was crying and saying something Linda didn’t understand.

“Is she okay?” Linda said, slowly getting to her feet.

But the woman didn’t answer. Instead, she picked up the girl and carried her into the house.

Linda brushed off her pants, put her hat back on and resumed her walk. She wondered where the woman and the girl were from and what language the woman had been speaking. She hoped the girl was okay.

Back home, eating lunch, Linda heard a knock at her front door. She opened it. On her porch stood the woman and the girl. The woman was holding a plate full of pastries.

“My name is Amara,” she said, “and this is Layla.”

The girl looked up at Linda and smiled.

“I’m Linda.”

“Hello, Linda,” Amara said. “Thank you for my daughter.”
9 Comments
peppermint
24/2/2023 10:47:57 am

So tender. So perfect for unraveling prejudice and misunderstandings. Thank you, Don.

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Jenna Hanan Moore
24/2/2023 01:39:03 pm

Excellent story! The end brought a tear to my eye.

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Don Tassone link
25/2/2023 12:12:13 pm

Thanks for your thoughtful comments.

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David Lowis
25/2/2023 04:25:27 pm

I sense this burgeoning relationship will be good for all of them.

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Don Tassone link
25/2/2023 05:35:09 pm

Thanks, David.

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Jim Bartlett link
25/2/2023 05:35:44 pm

Wow - a wonderful and very powerful story, Don. (Not that we expect anything less from you!)
Just marvelous
Jim

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Don Tassone link
25/2/2023 05:38:34 pm

Thank you, Jim.

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Dee Lorraine
26/2/2023 01:24:28 am

Perfect love casts out all fear. Well done, Don.

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Don Tassone link
26/2/2023 01:46:10 am

Thank you, Dee.

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