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No Longer Forgotten, by Marjan Sierhuis

27/10/2023

 
Fifty-year-old James shivers each time pellets of rain strikes his exposed skin. He crouches beneath a bridge’s overhang, but it offers no reprieve from the harsh weather.

His body aches when he coughs or tries to take a deep breath. And he doesn’t know how much longer he will have the strength to carry on.

His prayers for food and a warm bed have gone unanswered, and it is far more appealing for him to shut his eyes and go to sleep.

He pulls his old threadbare coat closer to his body with long knobby fingers. But the painful movement leaves him exhausted.
And like his shabby coat, his life appears to hang on by a thread.

Too weak to stand any longer, he collapses onto the ground, and he hears someone gasp.

James lifts his head with great effort as he stares at the stranger who kneels beside him.

“Hello, I am a community nurse. My name is Emma. I will look after you.”

James nods while he is covered with a blanket, and a tear rolls down his cheek.

And the sound of a siren is heard nearby.

No longer forgotten.
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Jim Bartlett link
27/10/2023 07:39:19 am

Not enough Emmas, and too many James.
Hanging on by a thread, indeed.

We all need someone to lean on...
Nice
Jim

david milner
27/10/2023 12:26:30 pm

Heart warming and welcome. I'm with Jim B., and you, of course.

Marjan Sierhuis
27/10/2023 12:34:26 pm

Thank you, Jim and David for reading and your wonderful comments. ❤

Krystyna
27/10/2023 09:07:04 pm

Thank goodness for Emma’s compassion. Beautifully written, Marjan.

Marjan Sierhuis
27/10/2023 11:16:45 pm

Your kind words are totally appreciated, Krystyna. Thank you for reading.

Sue Clayton
28/10/2023 11:54:08 pm

Digs deep into the plight of the homeless, but at least this one was saved.

Marjan Sierhuis
29/10/2023 12:21:18 am

That is so true, Sue. Thanks for reading.

Christa Loughrey
3/11/2023 11:10:06 am

This made me cry - so true of so many poor people. I hope it moves lots of us to do what we can to ease the plight.

Marjan sierhuis
5/11/2023 10:47:29 am

Thank you, Christa for your insightful comment. Much appreciated.

Jenna Hanan Moore
10/11/2023 03:06:52 pm

Really excellent, moving story, Marjan. I often forget to look at the longer stories and poems, so I didn't see this when it was first posted, but I'm so glad I got to read it now.

Marjan Sierhuis
10/11/2023 05:13:04 pm

Thank you Jenna for your lovely comment. I am pleased you discovered my story. Have a wonderful weekend.

Marjan


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