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Question of Character, by Krystyna Fedosejevs

20/11/2020

 
A hooded head sprung into view as the creaking window of a park entrance booth opened. “Sure you want to stay tonight?” the attendant snickered. “Character-building weather.”

Bryn nodded ‘yes’ and paid the overnight fee.

“What’s that sound?” I spluttered, preparing supper at our picnic table.

“Wildlife,” grinned Bryn. “Need to toughen up if you want to get through the night.”

Ground fog crept into our creekside tent site. Other campers were hunkered down rows away.

“Didn’t that park guy look creepy to you?” I asked, watching bats flit across the orangey sunset.

Bryn laughed. “You say that about every stranger.”

“What did he mean by ‘character-building’?”

We sat around the glowing campfire, holding mugs of hot beverage. Last sparks spiralled into the frosty air. We slipped into the tent.

Sleep taunted with surreal images. At one point startling me to awaken and scream. Turning to snuggle against Bryn, I found he wasn’t there.

Daylight roused us from confinement. We proceeded to exit the park when the same attendant caught our attention.

“You folks were okay last night? Couple of families bolted out early. Frightened by a strange animal roaming about.”

“A bear?” Bryn asked. “I’m sure one was sniffing our tent. I got up to scare it off but couldn’t see it.”

We travelled a fair distance before stopping for gasoline. As we started driving away, a man at the station grabbed a bag by an outdoor garbage receptacle.

“Hey mister, didn’t you forget something?” he yelled, running after us.

In his hand, a Sasquatch head-cover.
Swapan k Banerjee
20/11/2020 12:11:02 pm

Of great beauty, power and wonder - your prose. Very well teased out, Krystyna!

Swapan k Banerjee
20/11/2020 12:11:25 pm

Of great beauty, power and wonder - your prose. Very well teased out, Krystyna.

Krystyna
20/11/2020 03:55:59 pm

Thank you, Swapan. Your comment is taken to heart.

Marjan sierhuis
20/11/2020 06:02:16 pm

You wonder why the head cover. Perhaps the makings for a longer story? Nicely done, Krystyna.

Susan F. Reid
20/11/2020 07:57:52 pm

Krystyna,
What a surprise! I should have caught it coming with the foreshadowing of Byrn missing from the bed.

Mary Wallace
20/11/2020 08:40:37 pm

Clever little story Krystyna.

Krystyna
20/11/2020 09:18:32 pm

Precisely, Marjan, “why he head cover”? Yes, I have thought of expanding this story. Thanks for confirming the desire to see it done.
Thank you for liking.

Well done, Susan, you discovered the culprit. Or did you?

Thank you, Mary, for thinking so. Perhaps Bryn is the true clever one.

Sue Clayton
21/11/2020 02:39:53 am

Sasquatch Bryn out in the dead of night trying terror tactics to build character in others. Wonder what Mrs. Bryn thought of the retrieved head-cover?

Krystyna
21/11/2020 09:15:38 pm

Ah, Sue, perhaps she wasn’t a Mrs.Bryn, having time to say “goodbye” and leave him in the forest of his imagination.


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