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Retirement Rescue, by Jim Bartlett

13/1/2023

31 Comments

 
It’s not until he steps into the study does he notice the little wisp of steam trailing behind him. He smiles, picturing his coffee cup as a mini-locomotive, chugging its way toward the couch. Not too many years ago, well, maybe more than he cares to admit, that steam would be rising in the kitchen while he sat chuckling at Calvin and Hobbes, The Far Side, and all the other wonderful funnies that took up a full page in the newspaper.

But the paper’s gone digital, the funnies aren’t so funny, and it’s just not the same staring into a laptop as it was spreading the pages out on the counter, thumbing through the news, the sports, the travel section, entertainment, and, of course, the funnies.

He sets the cup down, letting it cool, and plops onto the sofa, his eyes drawn to the plastic tub of pictures and slides sitting beside the coffee table. He’d brought it up from the basement last week – New Year’s Eve, actually – along with a host of others, spending his night wistfully sifting through a lifetime of memories.

But he hadn’t made it to this one, the crème de la crème. “Adventures” is written on the side in thick black Sharpie letters, and the label really only scratches the surface.

Leaning forward, he pops off the top and reaches in, grabbing a good handful of the 5 x 7s and 35mm slides. He can’t help but laugh – all of these are from film, taken with his new (then), 40-years-old now, Nikon. In today’s world everyone uses their phone, and slides are passé, leaving Kodachrome, like the newspaper, to go the way of the dodo.

He takes a quick sip of his coffee, then settles back in the chair, misty eyes ready to continue his journey down memory lane.

The first is from the rim of the majestic Grand Canyon. Next up, he’s on a boat, preparing to snorkel at the Great Barrier Reef. Then the rainy day on the Galapagos Islands, a wise old tortoise smirking at the silly human. The humid but wondrous trip down the Amazon. The Pyramid of the Moon in Mexico on a hot summer day. The forever hike to the top of Half Dome in Yosemite. The cantankerous mule in Zion. Standing at the Berlin Wall before, then after it fell. Antarctica... beautiful, but brrrr.

He sets the photos aside, a bit melancholy, realizing it’s been 7 or 8 years since he sealed that container. When did he stop taking such marvelous adventures? And why?

Okay, so he’s 72 and retired, does that mean he has to sit here reminiscing about the “good ol’ days”?

Not a chance.

He slips out his phone and pulls up a number looked at many times, but never called. Time for that next adventure.

“Beachside Canine Rescue, home of the waggly tails. How can I help you?”

“Hello. I’d like to see about adopting a dog. One that’s ready for a big adventure.”
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31 Comments
Michael Borjon
13/1/2023 07:42:00 am

Love your story Jim!! I can relate to much of it, especially going through old photos and slides. Not so many great adventures, but lots of fond memories. Things have really changed over the years, sad to let some things goes. Really enjoyed the ending, because he realized that a dog was the perfect motivator for some new adventures in his life..,

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Jim Bartlett link
13/1/2023 04:32:45 pm

Thanks so much, Michael. We can choose to reminisce over old memories, or love them for what they were and make some new ones.
Thanks again
Jim

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Doug
13/1/2023 09:43:33 am

Great story Jim with a super ending. It sounds like old age was creeping up on him and was about to overtake him when he realized it and changed his life course. Nicely done.

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David Milner
13/1/2023 10:17:18 am

He's on the right track, and so are you Jim B. In a parallel world James Stewart is our hero in this sweet story.

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Jim Bartlett link
13/1/2023 04:35:40 pm

You couldn't ask for a better actor to play the part.
Thanks David - always appreciate your kind words
Jim

Jim Bartlett link
13/1/2023 04:34:08 pm

Thanks Doug. One of the reasons I run is that I know old age is right back there doing its best to catch me. I need to run faster. ;-)
Thanks
Jim

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Michael McCarthy
13/1/2023 02:47:36 pm

the good old days! Can't beat slowly going thru the newspaper. I love the ending especially. There's life in the old dog yet!

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Jim Bartlett link
13/1/2023 04:36:50 pm

Though not very environmentally friendly - I miss the newspaper. What a treat to read each day.
Thanks ever so much, Michael
Jim

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Angela Carlton link
13/1/2023 02:47:45 pm

Touching, inspiring...you're never too old to LIVE!

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Jim Bartlett link
13/1/2023 04:37:33 pm

You are so very right, Angela
Thanks a million
Jim

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Marjan Sierhuis
13/1/2023 02:49:09 pm

May there be many more adventures in his future for him and a new best friend. Wonderful story, Jim.

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Jim Bartlett link
13/1/2023 04:38:36 pm

I hope so, too, Marjan.
Thanks ever so much for your kind words.
Jim

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Mimi Grouse
13/1/2023 03:34:54 pm

Great story, Jim! Thoroughly heartwarming.

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Jim Bartlett link
13/1/2023 04:39:18 pm

Thanks, Mimi!
Appreciate ever so much!
Jim

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Krystyna
13/1/2023 03:54:01 pm

Excellent decision. A doggie ought to get him moving fast.
In my household, ‘retirement’ is a naughty word. Best left out of conversation and out of mind. Enjoyable, thoughtful story, Jim.

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Jim Bartlett link
13/1/2023 04:41:06 pm

Retirement doesn't have to mean sitting mindlessly in front of the tube watching the world go by. We can make it be whatever we want. A new adventure in the waiting.
Thanks, Krystyna!
Jim

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Krystyna
13/1/2023 04:49:45 pm

So true, Jim. It can me ‘retire’, as in finding a new set of wheels.

Sue Clayton
14/1/2023 12:43:00 am

From nostalgia to a new now, with a new best friend in tow. Wonderful story, Jim.

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Jim Bartlett link
14/1/2023 03:03:36 am

Thanks so much, Sue. Really appreciate it.

Jim

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Pamela Kennedy
14/1/2023 09:09:21 am

Wonderful story...loved the ending!

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Jim Bartlett link
14/1/2023 04:29:05 pm

Thanks so much, Pamela
Jim

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David Lowis
14/1/2023 11:24:57 am

A touching scene, wonderfully depicted. I think he's made the right decision.

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Jim Bartlett link
14/1/2023 04:30:29 pm

Thanks David. I also think he made the right decision.

Jim

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Dee Lorraine
14/1/2023 03:21:14 pm

Your story triggered a lot of good memories for me, Jim. I'm glad he realized it's time to make new memories, and with a companion who gives love unconditionally.

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Jim Bartlett link
14/1/2023 04:31:45 pm

A companion like that is an adventure in itself.
Appreciate your kind words, Dee!
Jim

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Carol Garrasi
14/1/2023 08:14:39 pm

Rescuing a dog is ALWAYS the perfect ending to any story. Truer words were never spoken that living with a member of the nation within is an adventure (nod to Spencer Quinn). Thanks Jim for another great story.

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Jim Bartlett link
14/1/2023 08:29:19 pm

Thanks Carol! Rescuing a member of the nation within (love the Spencer Quinn nod!!) is not only the perfect end, it's a great new beginning. Thanks for the kind words.
Jim

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Kathy Slats
14/1/2023 09:00:30 pm

You did it again Jim. Wonderful, entertaining, nostalgic read. Lost our fur baby in July. Not mentally ready for a new one yet, but will definitely rescue. Now, if I could only retire! 😊

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Jim Bartlett link
14/1/2023 09:29:35 pm

So hard to lose them - seems so unfair they live such short lives. But they give so much in those few years. We lost our dog (though she never knew she was a dog) at the beginning of 2020 (as if that year wasn't bad enough!) and it took me 2 1/2 years until Deb was able to convince me that a house was not a home without a dog. So we adopted a pup back in August.
Thanks ever so much for the kind words -
Jim

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Padmini Krishnan
16/1/2023 09:18:35 am

Thankfully, he decides to be young at heart and get on with more adventures. Lovely story, Jim. Also, I miss even the scent of freshly printed newspapers and magazines. After covid, we have to rely on internet for many things.

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Jim Bartlett link
16/1/2023 05:35:08 pm

Here (at least on this side of the country) the newspapers were becoming a thing of the past long before covid. First they shrunk the size - thus using less paper - then they begin to limit the areas to which they would be delivered. With subscriptions down (younger folks tend to read their phone or iPad for news) and paper not only expensive, but not really all that environmentally friendly, plus the news tending to be a day old (though a lot more in depth), they've slowly lost their audience. And they are dearly missed by at least some of us. ;-) Thanks so much for your kind words, Padmini
Jim

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