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Sleep, by Malvina Perova

8/7/2022

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In the quiet hour, when the guns rest and the trench’s walls envelop you gently in the dark, like a mother’s loving embrace, you chase your sleep away with a sip of lukewarm coffee and talk.
“What will you do next rotation?” You ask your war twinned brother, noticing the smears of dirt and clotted blood across his drained face, like marks of honour.
The reply is ever the same. “Sleep first, then take my family out.”
“Where?” you ask to keep hearing a human voice.
“Just shopping. Buy Alisa an ice cream cone and that awfully overpriced doll house she cried all night for. Hell with the money, just want her to have it.” He smiles his lopsided grin and shakes ash from the stub. It falls on his boot like charnel dust.
Tomorrow the enemy’s missile will put your best friend to sleep, as he wanted, but he’ll never take his daughter out.

In the quiet hour, when the guns rest and someone asks you what you’ll do next rotation, you don’t say, Sleep. You can’t sleep now, not until the last shot finishes its murderous fly. The pain-twisted faces of your battle brothers cross your mind every coming twilight. As a prayer, you mumble a promise to survive. Someone has to buy the doll house for Alisa.
9 Comments
Doug
8/7/2022 04:37:38 pm

Very well done Malvina.

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Jim Bartlett link
8/7/2022 04:38:14 pm

Oh, my - this is really powerful, Malvina.
I hope he is able to buy that doll house. And buy it soon...

Nicely done
Jim

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Don Tassone link
8/7/2022 06:17:30 pm

A graphic reminder of what's most important. Thank you, Malvina.

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David Milner
8/7/2022 08:26:50 pm

Someone has to buy the doll house for Alisa. Beautiful. Many thanks, Malvina.

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Peggy Gerber
8/7/2022 09:34:11 pm

A beautifully written, very powerful story.

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Sue Clayton
9/7/2022 06:55:23 am

Rips at the heart.

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Jennifer Duncan
11/7/2022 12:52:05 am

Such deep pain. Struggling to latch on to some hope for the future.

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Mary Daurio
13/7/2022 01:05:33 pm

Malvina, through your eyes the world can see the saddness and horror of the war. The human spirit and the humanity. Bless you and your voice to the world. Love, Mary.

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Rashna Walton
2/8/2022 02:26:12 pm

so close to home.

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