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Spinning, by Angela Carlton

27/5/2022

8 Comments

 
When you open your eyes, you remember where you are, on the floor in your living room. Lately, you’d been confused. The medication wasn’t working so your mind roamed and roamed to find your way back, back to a place where the sun was so bright, and your hair was long with a shiny wave. There was a guy in the mix, too. He laid white roses at your feet when you were crowned Queen of the dairy farm.

Now, you're a prisoner inside your own home, but your daughter appears, daily. She tends to things and a nurse comes. The daughter plays all the albums beneath the turntable. Blues and Jazz, fill the air. It makes you want to move-move. Round and round you go in circles like you did as a child on the playground.

Once, you were the child.

Now, you are the lady, spinning-spinning like that tiny ballerina in the jewelry box, the one with the sweet chimes, music that sets you free.
8 Comments
Jim Bartlett link
27/5/2022 04:19:56 pm

So well done, Angela. Heartbreaking, yet you feel and see it, even with so few words.
At the end, though she enjoys blues and jazz, enjoys the "move-move", I could hear Elton John singing "Tiny Dancer."
Well done
Jim

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Angela Carlton link
27/5/2022 06:43:16 pm

Thank you Jim, your words always inspire me. Congrats on your editor's choice award. I will read it later with a cocktail ;)

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Natalie
27/5/2022 07:49:17 pm

What a wonderful story! I absolutely love the reference to the jewelry box and the ballerina spinning. Takes me back in time, as I too had that jewelry box 💕

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Candace Arthuria Williams
27/5/2022 08:27:13 pm

"Memories, like the corners of my mind...." A beautiful expression of a sad reality.

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Ashley Smallwood
28/5/2022 03:06:20 am

Good story! Leaves you with mixed feelings sad and happy.

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Pamela Kennedy
28/5/2022 05:37:55 am

Well presented with much tenderness...

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Sue Clayton
28/5/2022 07:47:28 am

There's nothing like music to set you free to spin and spin like you did as a child.

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Cindy Patrick
28/5/2022 02:13:57 pm

"Music sets you free", so good!! Beautiful imagery, embracing the delight through the sadness...

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