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Summer's Last Hurrah, by Jim Bartlett

30/9/2022

 
Mikey had looked about everywhere before he found Grandpa. He’d checked the barn, the chicken coop, even his big ol’ workshop with all those tools and that funny smell. Yet, it wasn’t until he took the windy dirt trail through the cattails that he finally saw him sitting at the end of the dock. He was staring out across the duck pond with his bare feet dangling over the edge, his Cubs’ cap tipped back, and his trusty Igloo ice chest right beside him.

“Grandpa, Grandpa!” Mikey raced down the weathered wooden planks, his little tennis-shoed feet coming to a slap of a stop just as the old man turned to greet him. “The big maple...” he cried, nearly out of breath. “I saw some yellow leaves on it.” He gave a huff and his head drooped down as if his neck had melted in the midday heat. “That means summer’s gonna be OVER, Grandpa. What am I gonna do? I can’t let summer end without doing somethin’ super!”

That big smile Grandpa always wore when all was right with the world broke across his face, and he put a hand on Mikey’s shoulder. “You know, Mikey, when I stepped out to feed the chickens this morning, there was a bit of nip in the air. And the sun, well, he must be getting tired of doing summer, because he wasn’t even up yet. That surely means that in the next week or two those trees will be a collage of reds and oranges and yellows, and all the shadows will start their autumn stretch. The next thing you know...” he winks, “...you’ll be carvin’ up a Halloween Jack-O-Lantern.”

He gave his head a shake and turned back for a long gaze across the pond. There wasn’t a stitch of wind, and the sun seemed to have a twin sitting right out in the middle.

“So, I thought I’d better do something real special.”

Mikey’s eyes popped wide. “You did? What’cha doin’?”

Grandpa tapped his little cooler. “Well, Grandma made a couple of egg salad sandwiches—“

“I LOVE egg salad sandwiches!”

“—and filled a couple of Mason jars with lemonade.”

“Mmmmmmm.”

“But, best of all, she baked some chocolate chip cookies.”

“Oh, WOW...” He sniffed the air, as if the oven was right there on the dock. “So, what ARE you doing, Grandpa?”

Grandpa’s smile seemed to grow, and he took another quick gander across the still water.

“Nothin’.”

“Nothin’? What?” Mikey’s shoulders dropped, yet he just couldn’t keep his eyes off the Igloo. And maaan, he could almost taste that egg salad sandwich.

Grandpa, catching Mikey’s gaze, gave his chin a rub as if off in deep thought. “You know, there’s an awful lot of nothin’ to be done today. I sure could use some help.”

Mikey felt his face light up. “I bet I could help. I’m REAL good at doing nothin’.”

Grandpa patted the dock. “That’s my boy. Have a seat. Let’s get busy.”

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David Milner
30/9/2022 02:47:51 pm

When all is right with the world, and it sure as eggs is with this gem. Bless you, Jim B.

Jim Bartlett link
30/9/2022 05:00:07 pm

Thanks so much, David. Always appreciate your kind words.
Jim

Marjan sierhuis
30/9/2022 04:18:38 pm

A lovely and feel good kind of story, Jim.

Jim Bartlett link
30/9/2022 05:01:38 pm

Thanks so much, Marjan.
Waiting for your next poem or story!
Jim

Michael McCarthy
30/9/2022 05:18:29 pm

Just what the doctor ordered! It's great the way the relationship between Mikey and Grandpa is depicted . Just how much it means to Mikey to spend time with Grandpa doing nothing', and even more important to Grandpa.
Great stuff, Jim

Jim Bartlett link
30/9/2022 07:31:48 pm

Thanks Michael. You've really nailed the essence of the story.
Take care
Jim

Doug
30/9/2022 05:40:27 pm

Nice story Jim. It's good to see values transferred and even jump a generation. Good for both parties. Great job once again.

Jim Bartlett link
30/9/2022 07:33:17 pm

Thanks so much, Doug. I agree, it's definitely good for both. And sometimes it does skip a generation (or two).
Take care
Jim

Carol Garrasi
30/9/2022 06:38:59 pm

What an absolutely sweet and simple story. Maybe wish I had a grandpa. Lovely reminder to slow down and do a whole lot of nothing. Well done Jim well done.

Jim Bartlett link
30/9/2022 07:34:42 pm

You are too kind, Carol. Thanks so much. I really appreciate your "sweet" words.
Jim

Doug
30/9/2022 06:57:10 pm

Hey Jim, I forgot to ask you, when you're busy doing nothing, how do you know when you're finished?

Jim Bartlett link
30/9/2022 07:38:56 pm

It's a fine honed skill developed over time, Doug. Our souls need balance, and only after a lot of trial and error, do we find the magic that lets us know when our nothing is done (for that moment). ;-)
Thanks again
Take care
Jim

Angela Carlton link
30/9/2022 08:36:32 pm

A touching salut to the end of summer with the promise of new beginnings.

Jim Bartlett link
1/10/2022 05:30:15 am

Thanks Angela!
Do appreciate it
Jim

Candace Arthuria
1/10/2022 12:31:23 am

Funny, Doug. Hey, Jim. Oh, those carefree days when none of us had to do nothin!'

Jim Bartlett link
1/10/2022 05:31:19 am

Those days are gone before you knew you had them.
Thanks so much, Candace
Jim

Michael Borjon
1/10/2022 04:33:48 am

Jim, I enjoyed this story So Much!! It brought back many fond memories of of my relationship with my Grandad. I always had a great time working on projects with him, but one of my favorite things to do was to sit on his front with a jar of Grandma’s sweet tea, while he told me about the good ole days…

Jim Bartlett link
1/10/2022 05:33:26 am

So glad you enjoyed it, Michael! And very cool that it brought back some precious memories of those times you spent with your own granddad. Not much can be wrong when you're sitting back having a cool drink of sweet tea.
Thanks much
Jim

Michael Borjon
1/10/2022 05:46:10 am

Yes, those are some of the good ole days that I tell my granddaughters about, while we have ice cream cones together…

Sue Clayton
1/10/2022 05:53:23 am

This was superb. The voices of Mikey and Grandpa were spot on and the very essence of a hazy lazy summer's day came through with every word. Well done, Jim.

Jim Bartlett link
1/10/2022 08:09:36 am

Very kind of you, Sue. I really do appreciate it.
Your comments to all are always well thought out and well meaning, and I think everyone here at FFF is deeply appreciative of your taking the extra moments to put down those thoughts.
Thanks again
Jim

Paritosh Chandra Dugar
1/10/2022 11:16:48 am

A mighty salute to you, Mikey, and grandpa. A gripping tale, Jim.

Jim Bartlett link
1/10/2022 04:33:02 pm

Thanks Paritosh! Much appreciated!
Jim

Don Tassone link
1/10/2022 12:05:17 pm

Sweet. Well done, Jim.

Jim Bartlett link
1/10/2022 04:39:55 pm

Thanks, Don. Always appreciate your kind words.
Jim

Mimi Grouse
1/10/2022 01:58:51 pm

Aww! I love this picturesque, heartwarming tale. Stories like this make the world a better place.

Jim Bartlett link
1/10/2022 04:40:49 pm

Very sweet of you to say, Mimi. And I really do appreciate it!!

Jim

Peggy Gerber
1/10/2022 08:40:41 pm

A very wise grandpa. These are the kind of days that kids remember and cherish for always.

Jim Bartlett link
2/10/2022 01:39:10 am

Indeed, Peggy, we sure hope so, right?
Thanks so much for your kind words.
Jim

Cindy Patrick
2/10/2022 04:19:14 am

Thanks for this, Jim. Waves of "feel good" washed over and,through me. Lovely and lasting visual.

Jim Bartlett link
2/10/2022 05:20:36 am

And thanks ever so much for the kind words, Cindy. I'm so glad some of the "feel good" washed all the way through to you,

Take care
Jim

Tom Baldwin
3/10/2022 10:59:25 am

A lovely story, Jim. It reminds me of being with my grandson, not doing, just being.

Jim Bartlett link
4/10/2022 01:58:52 am

Give yourself lots of credit for "being with," Tom. That is huge.
Thanks for the kind words.
Jim

Padmini Krishnan
5/10/2022 12:35:06 pm

In this busy world where parents pester kids to chase their goals, such grandpas or grandmas are blessings. This was a sweet and lovely story.

Jim Bartlett link
5/10/2022 05:31:22 pm

Thanks so much, Pamini. I always thought John Lennon said it best - "When I was 5 years old, my mother always told me that happiness was the key to life. When I went to school, they asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down ‘happy’. They told me I didn’t understand the assignment, and I told them they didn’t understand life."
Thanks again
Jim

Robert P. Bishop
7/10/2022 01:25:52 am

Hi Jim...really cool story. Enjoyed it. Grandpa is a pretty smart fellow. Little Mikey is going to learn a lot from him.

Jim Bartlett link
7/10/2022 06:39:09 am

Thanks so much, Robert. So glad you enjoyed it! I can only hope Mikey does pick up a thing or two along the way. ;-)
Take care
Jim

Alex B
7/10/2022 08:37:46 am

I can taste grandma’s home-made lemonade and I bet Little Mikey loves doing nothing with grandpa sounds fantastic way to spend the weekend Nice one. Alex :)

Jim Bartlett link
7/10/2022 04:09:44 pm

This was inspired by an old Calvin and Hobbes cartoon in which Calvin says to Hobbes - "There's never enough time to do all the nothing you want to do."
Thanks, Alex
Jim

Kim Favors
8/10/2022 02:58:12 am

I love the visuals in your stories. They're like watching movies.

Jim Bartlett link
8/10/2022 03:05:12 am

Thanks, Kim! I always love it when someone paints a picture with their words, so it's something I strive for. I appreciate you saying that, as it means I'm getting it right once in a while. ;-)
Thanks again
Jim

Dee Lorraine
8/10/2022 05:02:09 am

This story is absolutely marvelous! The world would be a much better place if we had all had grandparents like that. Thank you, Jim.

Jim Bartlett link
8/10/2022 04:23:14 pm

So very kind of you, Dee. I really appreciate your comment!
Yeah, now and again it's nice to take a "chill pill" and let the world go mad on its own. If only there were a few more grandparents, and parents for that matter, who were able to pass that along to the next generation.
Take care
Jim

Candace Arthuria
18/10/2022 05:28:59 pm

Jim, I had to come back to this after a few weeks because I failed to do it justice the first time. Love the bucolic landscape. And the contrast of the "tennis-shoed feet" to Grandpa's bare ones dangling over the edge of the duck pond. An absolutely superb piece of literature.

Jim Bartlett link
19/10/2022 05:30:35 am

Wow, thanks so much, Candace. Writing can be its own reward (not always, but mostly), but having someone use their words to let a writer know his/her words were felt, makes it all even more worth the while. And, like your words here, can make a writer's day. ;-)
Thanks for coming back and taking another moment to make my moment.
Take care
Jim

Susmita Ramani link
20/10/2022 08:43:00 pm

This is absolutely wonderful! It captures end-of-summer and the awesomeness of grandparents so perfectly. The last line is a peach!!

Susmita Ramani link
20/10/2022 08:44:03 pm

(I mean Mikey's last line!!)

Jim Bartlett link
20/10/2022 10:52:19 pm

(Of course!) Thanks ever so much, Susmita! The summer, like life itself, whizzes by way too quick, so taking advantage of those special moments is key to keeping a smile on your face and life in perspective. Thanks again
Jim

Phyllis Souza
28/10/2022 05:59:20 pm

I'm raising a glass of champagne. "Here's to doing nothin'." Phyllis

Jim Bartlett link
28/10/2022 11:26:06 pm

Thanks, Phyllis! I hope the bubbles tickle your nose as you tip back your glass. ;-)
Jim


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