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The Conspiracy, by Jim Bartlett

9/10/2020

 
Gladys peels open her second floor bedroom curtain just enough to peek across the street where those two abhorrent neighbors, Milly Steinberg and Shelly Appleton, have gathered once again on the sidewalk concocting their latest set of vicious rumors. They lean close, whispering into each other’s ears as if it’s some big secret that they despise Gladys, then, adding insult to injury, steal a glance or point an accusing finger at her house.

Gladys shakes her head. It’s a wonder that vile man from up the street – Jess? Josh? With her blood pressure on the rise, she can’t recall which – isn’t right in the middle of this gang of conspirators.

Jealous they are. Each and every one of them.

When they leave, she steps from the window in a huff and snatches her cup of tea, cold now, having giving up hope on her prompt return. It’s then she realizes this all started last summer right after she’d gone out of her way to put together a Fourth of July block party. She had a drawing with a handmade prize, a wonderful barbecue, and even got Jack Stephenson – bless his soul, he passed just last winter – to play his guitar while everyone gathered ‘round singing “America the Beautiful.”

Though she’s been here for nearly 20 years, a stream of newcomers, mainly retired folks, have slowly filled the neighborhood, most in just the last couple of years. Was it so terrible to think it might be nice to have a “get to know one another” sort of thing?

Obviously so.

Things have been no different with her job – or FORMER job that is. After giving her soul to the company for 35 years, there was a downsizing. And, of course, it was HER department that ended up being shut down, leaving her no choice but to retire.

So today, after having never missed a day at the plant, she’s home on a Monday, relegated to the pain of watching the neighbors gossip about her.

A knock at the door pulls her from her self-pity, and she cautiously makes her way down the stairs. However, she stops at the bottom step when she sees that man’s face – Jess, she remembers now – peering through the window. What could he possibly want?

“Yes?” she says, opening the door only a crack.

“Hello, Gladys. I was wondering, with such lovely gladiolas gracing your front yard, if you could take a look at my garden and tell me what I’m doing wrong. I can’t seem to find my green thumb.”

She feels the heat of a blush, then nods, pulling the door the rest of the way open.

“Oh...I guess I could.”

She follows him down the walk, then along the side of his house toward his backyard. As he opens the gate, she catches sight of an arch of balloons, under which stands most of her neighbors. A banner stretches across the fence which reads: HAPPY RETIREMENT!

“SURPRISE,” they call out.

Gladys can only cry.
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michael McCarthy
9/10/2020 04:07:52 pm

what a great story. there is goodness around, we have to be patient. i did not expect the story to develop in this way, Gladys is a well drawn character, and, as usual, there's more in the story than one realizes

Jim link
9/10/2020 04:31:57 pm

Thanks ever so much for the kind comments, Michael!
Jim

Swapan k Banerjee
9/10/2020 04:59:40 pm

The first para is a candid camera shot of the most picturesque kind. May such conspiracy continue to be hatched!

Jim link
9/10/2020 06:37:50 pm

Thanks so much, Swapan. Yes - the best kind of conspiracy indeed ;-)
Jim

Mike B
9/10/2020 06:32:48 pm

Great Story Jim!!!
What a Pleasant Surprise when we find out that we misjudged a group of people...

JIm link
9/10/2020 06:38:57 pm

Yes - such a pleasant surprise! Thanks ever so much for the read and comments!
Jim

phyllis souza
9/10/2020 06:42:49 pm

"SURPRISE" a wonderful word to end a wonderful story!

Jim link
9/10/2020 06:47:29 pm

You are too kind with your comments, Phyllis.
Thanks so much.
Jim

Pamela Kennedy
9/10/2020 09:09:29 pm

Jim, your story really made me smile.

Jim link
9/10/2020 10:01:36 pm

Thanks Pamela! A smile always makes everything worthwhile!
Take care
Jim

Sue Clayton
10/10/2020 04:09:35 am

And now Gladys can look forward to a happy retirement amongst those in her friendly neighborhood. Nice rendition of humanity, Jim.

Jim link
10/10/2020 04:33:28 am

Thanks Sue! Sometimes we have to look a little harder, dig a little deeper to find some humanity out there, but it's always worth it.
Take care
Jim

Doug
10/10/2020 07:21:25 am

Well done Jim. A nicely written "feel good" story that is much needed from time to time. A story that many people can relate to.

Jim link
10/10/2020 03:42:39 pm

Thanks Doug - with all that is going on out there, we need a feel good every now and again
Jim

Mary Wallace
10/10/2020 11:37:30 am

A great reminder Jim that many of the ills in this world exist only in our minds. Lovely story.

Jim link
10/10/2020 03:43:44 pm

Many if not most, indeed. How we take things is most of the battle. Thanks much for the read and comments, Mary!
Jim

Marjan sierhuis
10/10/2020 12:44:27 pm

Life sometimes takes an unexpected turn. When it does, savor the moment while you can. Nicely done, Jim.

Jim link
10/10/2020 03:45:21 pm

Life rip roars right along, so we really do need to savor, soak in, and jump for joy with each of those nice little unexpected turns. Thanks for the kind comment, Marjan!
Jim

Candace Arthuria Williams
16/10/2020 09:07:01 pm

I'm a little late, Jim. But do you mind if I add to the accolades? Thanks for reminding us to give peace (and people) a chance.

Jim link
16/10/2020 09:25:25 pm

Wow - thanks, Candace. I do appreciate the "accolades," whenever or however they may find their way. And very kind of you to take a moment to express those thoughtful words!!
Take good care
Jim

Sarah Blum
26/10/2020 04:42:15 am

Knowing you and how you think and write I was sure, when Gladys began her pity party, that you would have a positive surprise for her and for us and you did not disappoint. Well done, as always, Jim you delivered yet another gem of a story that gives us hope.

Jim link
26/10/2020 04:20:01 pm

Thanks so much, Sarah. You are too kind.
Very much appreciate your comments!
Take care
Jim


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