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The Grim Reaper, by Doug Bartlett

29/9/2023

 
Tom, a wealthy businessman, living in San Francisco, sent his servant to the local grocery store to pick up some much needed supplies for the kitchen.

As his servant walked into the store he saw the Grim Reaper. He was so startled he immediately left the store empty handed with an urgency never seen before. He returned to his master and told him what had happened. He asked to borrow a car in order to put as much distance between the Grim Reaper and himself.

“Of course you can borrow my car, but where would you go?”

“To Los Angeles where I have family.”

The servant left and the Master went to the same store to get his groceries. He discovered the Grim Reaper was still there and explained to him what had just happened and how startled his servant had become.

“He wasn’t as startled as I was,” he responded, “ I have an appointment with him tomorrow in Los Angeles.”

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Jim Bartlett link
29/9/2023 04:57:01 pm

You can run, but you can't hide.
Loved the twist
Jim

Doug
29/9/2023 05:46:53 pm

Thanks Jim. I should have used that as the title.

Mike Uptain
29/9/2023 06:03:36 pm

No matter where you go, there you are!

Good story Doug!

Doug
29/9/2023 06:09:46 pm

Yes you are. Thanks Mike.

Michael B.
29/9/2023 06:05:38 pm

Great story Doug!!! You can’t hide from the reaper, even though Blue Oyster Cult sang “Don’t Fear the Reaper” lol!!!

Doug
29/9/2023 06:11:19 pm

Thanks Michael.

Don Tassone link
29/9/2023 09:05:52 pm

The servant should become a Los Angeles dodger. Sorry. Fun story, Doug.

Doug
29/9/2023 10:01:37 pm

A Dodger or an Angel. Thanks Don.

Sue Clayton
30/9/2023 05:46:42 am

Let's hope Tom gets straight onto the phone to his servant.

Doug
30/9/2023 06:46:02 pm

Thanks Sue. Good idea.

Christa Loughrey
30/9/2023 08:58:16 am

Very enjoyable, Doug.

Doug
30/9/2023 06:47:29 pm

Thanks Christa. Glad you enjoyed it.

Marjan Sierhuis
30/9/2023 12:31:18 pm

I enjoyed your story, Doug and the great comments.

Doug
30/9/2023 06:48:58 pm

Thank you Marjan and I appreciate your comment.


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