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The Hospital Stay, by Doug Bartlett

27/8/2021

 
I groggily woke up and looked down at my abdominal area only to see, much to my chagrin, a twelve inch incision. This meant. The surgery was supposed to be done arthroscopically which meant I should be seeing three small holes not a foot long gash. I realized there must have been complications during the operation..I had been sliced open like a Christmas goose. Well, there goes my hope of going home today from the hospital.

Hospitals were for sick people and people died there. I was not sick and I was not ready to die, especially in there. I was ready to go home now but that was not to be. Upon leaving the recovery room I was wheeled into a room that was already occupied by an African-American gentleman by the name of Gabe, who would be my roommate.

Needless to say, I was not in the best of moods. In fact I was despondent and depressed. Perhaps I was even borderline suicidal but Gabe was really nice and I enjoyed his company. Every negative thing I had to say he would counter with at least two positive ones. I knew I would not have recovered so well or so quickly if it wasn’t for Gabe. He always had the perfect thing to say.

There was a Bible that had been left in the room on my nightstand. I needed to kill time so I picked it up, opened it at a random place and began reading it. It was talking about angels and how God sent them to help people, not that I believed in them mind you but it helped pass the time.
Four days later the doctor released me. I said goodbye to Gabe but got no response. I pulled back the curtain that separated Gabe and myself to thank him for his company and his words of encouragement he had given me.

I was surprised to see that he was not there and his bed was neatly made. I couldn’t believe that he would leave without saying good-bye.

A nurse walked into my room at that time to take my vital signs and I asked her where Gabe was. She looked at me rather strangely and told me I was in this room by myself my entire stay.
Mike B
27/8/2021 03:36:30 pm

I really enjoyed that one Doug!! I truly believe that we sometimes entertain Angels unaware.

Doug
27/8/2021 05:34:24 pm

Thanks Mike. You're so right.

Jim link
27/8/2021 03:45:40 pm

Nice one, Doug
Jim

Doug
27/8/2021 05:35:45 pm

Thanks Jim. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

Mike u
27/8/2021 07:38:27 pm

Gabe for short, obviously Gabriel there with you!

Doug
27/8/2021 09:32:06 pm

Yes Mike, I was wondering if anyone would pick up on that.

Mike B
27/8/2021 09:45:20 pm

Like Mike U said it was obvious…
:-)

Sandra James
28/8/2021 03:30:57 am

Very well done, Doug! Thoroughly enjoyed it :)

Doug
28/8/2021 04:05:51 am

Thank you very much Sandra for that nose nice words.

Ian Mitchell
28/8/2021 11:36:20 am

I liked that Doug. Well written.

Doug
28/8/2021 05:22:29 pm

Thank you Ian, glad you enjoyed it.

Susan F. Reid
28/8/2021 04:05:24 pm

Beautiful story, Doug.

Doug
28/8/2021 05:23:47 pm

Thank you Susan.

Sue Clayton
30/8/2021 07:39:00 am

God's right-hand man, always on hand when needed.

Doug
30/8/2021 05:28:58 pm

How very true Sue. Thank you for commenting.

Norman Shaft
1/9/2021 09:13:29 pm

Quite literally had shivers along my spine by the end.
Well done Doug!

Doug
2/9/2021 04:56:53 am

Thank you Norman. I appreciate your comment.

Chuck J Anderson
5/9/2021 11:48:38 pm

Reminds me of my true angel story, It's too long to relate here, but an angel on a motorcycle led me home on a dark night when my headlight was out. I turned around to thank him and he was gone, no sound, nothing.

Doug
6/9/2021 04:46:46 am

Thanks for sharing Chuck.


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