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The Loop in the River, by Isabel Evans

1/10/2021

 
It is an unpromising suggestion; to leave the path and cross the rubbish strewn rough grass to the wreck of the old building – rusty wire fencing, old tissues, old beer cans, old bottles, old condoms.

I pick my way slowly, trailing his enthusiasm.

“Look!” he says “Look!!” and points through the wire at the ground. “Look!” His green wool hat is nearly coming off in the excitement and the bitter cold.

There on the floor he’s pointing to…

No, they’re not turds. They are owl pellets: huge, black, shiny, curvaceous, full of the tiny bones of rodents.

“The barn owls roost in here!”
And suddenly I’m angry.

We’ve seen gulls, and sparrows, of course. Swans, mallard, geese. Chaffinches, redpoll, fieldfare, redwing, oystercatchers, mergansers, golden eye. A kestrel hanging in the air, hunting. We’ve seen island snowdrops, and springing buds. Walkers.

A small paradise of rough ground, water, and the widest sky my heart can hold. A wide sky so close to the town, a precious link to the wild. And now – the evidence of barn owls.

There’s a plan to build a road, a new bridge over the river. Across all this.

Where will the barn owls roost? Where will the kestrel hunt? Where will we walk, under a huge sky?
Jim link
1/10/2021 04:28:26 pm

This is well done, Isabel,
People wonder why coyotes wander in neighborhoods, or this or that animal slowly goes extinct. We continue to steal their habitats little by little.
Jim B.

Sue Clayton
3/10/2021 03:46:30 am

Well said, Isabel. So many habitats lost in the quest for progress.

Dee Lorraine
3/10/2021 06:03:57 pm

A good story, Isabel. It reminds me of the old Joni Mitchell song about paving Paradise to put up a parking lot.


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