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The New Guy, by Jim Bartlett

8/1/2019

 
He watches as the new guy steps into the room, a green wave of envy, jealousy, even a slight edge of anger, washing over him as he notes the bounce in the newbee’s step, the twinkle of hope in his eyes, the smile of all that can be imagined stretched across his face. Oh yeah, he remembers his own first day on the job, carrying that very same smug look. Anything was possible. The world was at his feet.

But over the course of this last year, his last year, that sparking hope had faded. Too many expectations coming from too many directions. And unlike times past, these requirements came with no tolerance. Not a smidgen of room for compromise. Making matters worse, they came with the demands of immediacy. Not next month, not next week, today. Now.

The stress, the strain, the intolerance left everyone divided and bickering. Barbs were tossed around rather than answers. Fingers pointed at who might be to blame rather than working together for a solution. These days no one – except the new guy – came with a spring in their step, good will in their pocket. Somewhere, somehow, it had all fallen to the wayside.

He takes in a deep sigh, and moves to the line to shake the new guy’s hand. Maybe this is all his fault. He just took the wrong tack. Expected the better of his contemporaries. This young kid will pick up the pieces and make things right. Make it so folks have something to look forward to again.

The person in front of him moves away and now it’s his turn. He reaches out, but the youngster is awestruck at his presence, taking a moment to meet his hand. When he finally speaks, it’s with a sincerity that takes him completely off guard.

“2018, I’m so impressed to finally meet you. I have some pretty big shoes to fill.”
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He feels a warmth rise, his face flush. “You’ll do fine, 2019. You’ll do fine.”
Mike
9/1/2019 12:06:29 am

I loved the ending, I didn't see that coming Jim. Hopefully the new guy knows enough about the old guy to make some changes for the better.
I'll do my best to help him out, maybe we all can...

Jim link
9/1/2019 02:23:52 am

Thanks ever so much, Mike! I really appreciate the read and the comments!

Gordon Lawrie
9/1/2019 10:24:34 am

Happy New Year to you, too, Jim – and to everyone at Friday Flash Fiction.

Jim link
9/1/2019 04:27:17 pm

Thanks ever so much, Gordon. And a very Happy New Year to you!

Michael McCarthy
9/1/2019 10:37:28 am

This is so good, beautifully descriptive. Love the writing. As usual did not see the end coming.
Perfect example of flash!
Mike McC

Jim link
9/1/2019 04:29:16 pm

Appreciate the read and taking a moment to make a comment Mike! Have a great New Year!

Jim

Doug
12/1/2019 10:37:52 pm

Loved it. Thanks for sharing that.

Jim link
12/1/2019 11:07:51 pm

Thanks Doug! I appreciate the read and taking a moment to comment!!
Jim

Sarah Blum link
12/1/2019 11:56:38 pm

Loved reading it. You brought to life. 2019 does feel like your vision of it. Thank you!

Jim link
13/1/2019 12:44:44 am

Wow - thanks for the nice comment, Sarah!! Hope the "new year" is good to you!

Jim


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