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The Next Adventure, by Bruce Levine

27/11/2020

 
Janice and James had fully settled into their new home. No longer did they have to think about where a basic store was located or how to get there. James would even boast that he now knew twenty-seven different ways to get anywhere. A boast Janice ignored benevolently, but she knew that no matter how lost James got he’d, somehow, manage to find his way home. It gave her a sense of security since, as she admitted, knowing the direction they were going, whether north, south, east or west, was not her strongest attribute.

Janice had many attributes and James relied heavily on her opinion, other than which way to turn or what road to take. He often kidded her about the neon sign on the living room wall (metaphorical though it may be) saying Janice Is Always Right.

Now their days took on a sense of normalcy. When they weren’t involved with the every-day aspects of life they explored new towns and areas, widening not only their knowledge, but discovering new things outside their basic comfort zone. Of course new places to eat was always high on the list, especially for James, but fun stores and shops and surprising locales and landscapes was a never-ending pleasure. A river, for example, with intense rapids running through Main Street in one town was a cause for many pictures.

In addition to loving to get lost James loved studying maps. He would often suggest a trip in a given direction, only knowing the basics and then hoping for the best.

So far things had gone well.

Janice enjoyed the adventures, as James called them, but always wondered what James was planning next.
Sue Clayton
27/11/2020 08:22:46 am

I am not lost, just temporarily displaced, so the saying goes. How often do we pass a road and say "I wonder where that leads". And I bet Janice will always steer James in the right direction. A good story, Bruce.

Mary Wallace
27/11/2020 11:47:35 pm

All who wander are not lost. Spontaneity is the joy in a relationship.

Pamela Kennedy
28/11/2020 01:01:17 pm

A sense of adventure (him), no sense of direction (me),
discovering a new place to eat (both)....how I can relate to that couple....such a nice story.

phyllis souza
30/11/2020 11:27:57 pm

A road less traveled can lead to an expected end. Good story.


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