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The Presentation, by Jim Bartlett

8/10/2021

 
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His presentation complete, Montee risks a look up from the lectern, letting his gaze drift to the far side of cavernous Honor’s Room. There the commissioners, a distinguished group comprised of the world’s most acclaimed scientists and political leaders, sit quietly behind a massive stone table that stretches across the rear podium. The air hangs heavy as he waits, his legs seemingly ready to give. Finally, after a moment too long, the Chair takes a deep sigh and rises.

“It would seem that the lengthy time you’ve invested in your research, intimately intermingling with these creatures, no less”—he pauses, thumbing through the archaic stack of papers and images—“has concluded with a rather extensive, and I must say, impressive report. Correct me if I am wrong, but my readings do not provide a favorable impression of this species. They are aggressive. Territorial. Destructive. Have little or no regard for their own. And, with no natural predator, their population has outgrown their food and water resources, resulting in one herd attacking another--”

“That’s to be expected, Commissioner Zye,” interrupts a panelist two seats over. “Remember, these are simple creatures with limited adaptation skills.”

Commissioner Zye nods. ”Noted. I think my fear is that their proclivity for violence will not stay self-contained. Their nature is one of using up the resources of a region, then simply moving on. This report details some of their early attempts at migration beyond their own realm, so we must weigh the possibility that one day they might stretch their hunting grounds in our direction...”

The panelist on the far right jumps up. “Unacceptable! These creatures are horrid and vile. They pose a great threat. I move to have them eradicated immediately.”

“Hear, hear,” call out a good number of the group in unison.

“But, wait...wait...” Montee raises his hand. “Did you not listen to the Sound-maker? Feel its impact? See how this changes everything?”

“Sound-maker?”

“Yes... the little box included with my report.”

“Well, no...we thought the report brought forth enough of their nature. No need to—“

“Never mind,” Montee interrupts with a huff. “Let me show you.”

Feeling the weight of the commission’s eyes upon him, he shifts a stack of his papers, revealing a small device. A set of wires dangle from it leading down to large boxes that sit to either side of him. With a smile, he swipes the device’s glass cover and the grim hall suddenly fills with magical sounds.

There’s a collective gasp and several of the commissioners spring to their feet.

“What...what is that?”

“It’s called music.”

“And these creatures make this, uh, music?”

“Yes,” he says, swiping the glass to turn it off. “As repulsive as these creatures may be, they bring hope in their art. And music. Throughout their Earth they play it in so many different forms, yet each speaks to the heart, as if it were a universal language.”

“We’d love to hear more,” says the Chair.

“Of course. Please...listen to the music.”

Candace Arthuria Williams
8/10/2021 05:20:57 pm

I anticipated that they were humans, Jim. You described us perfectly. But I was pleasantly surprised by the concert. Nice touch. Great writing, good marketing presentation.

Jim B. link
8/10/2021 05:45:39 pm

Yeah, it's pretty hard to guise our traits, isn't it? But every day, despite ourselves, one had to try and find a way to smile. ;-) Thanks for the read and nice comment, Candace!
Take care
Jim

Michael McCarthy
8/10/2021 06:39:31 pm

It makes you stop and think just what we are doing .
One day we'll have to face the music ! Sorry that was awful! Great idea and brilliantly executed. I also find a smile helps .

Jim B. link
8/10/2021 06:50:12 pm

Love the face the music comment! And, yes, a smile always helps.
Thanks much for the read and comment, Michael
Take care
Jim

Mike B
8/10/2021 06:41:04 pm

Great story Jim!! My guess was that Montee was referring to humans, but wasn’t sure where he was going. I love the fact that Music is so universal. The Doobie Brothers’ “Listen to the Music” was a Nice and Appropriate add.

Jim B. link
8/10/2021 06:52:06 pm

Yeah, as I said to Candace, it's pretty hard to camouflage our true nature.
Music and smiles do help, though.
Thanks, Mike, for the nice comment
Take care
Jim

Gordon Lawrie
8/10/2021 07:07:56 pm

I just love these stories that come with the music attached!

Jim B. link
8/10/2021 07:24:25 pm

Thanks, Gordon. I figure that maybe a great song will make up for my so-so writing. ;-)
Hope all is well on your side of the pond. Fall has definitely fallen here.

Take care
Jim

Marjan Sierhuis
8/10/2021 10:15:47 pm

Your words shine on paper, Jim with or without the music. Great writing as always.

Jim link
8/10/2021 11:08:17 pm

Well, you are too kind, Marjan.
Thanks much for the read and nice comment
Take care
Jim

Krystyna
8/10/2021 11:45:19 pm

Fascinating, Jim. Topnotch writing! Love hearing the music.

Jim link
9/10/2021 03:11:13 am

Thanks much, Krystyna! Appreciate your kind words and that you enjoyed the bonus track ;-)
Take care
Jim

Dan A
9/10/2021 12:57:08 am

I have read several stories where the follies of mankind threatens their demise. This one introduces an interesting take on not throwing away the baby with the bath water.

Jim link
9/10/2021 03:12:59 am

Thanks Dan. Yeah, we have plenty of follies out there that one day will come to roost. Hopefully we'll come to our senses or find a heart.
Thanks for your comment. Much appreciated
Jim

Sue Clayton
9/10/2021 05:07:35 am

If music be the food that soothes the savage beasts of earth and the judgmental breasts of aliens, then play on.

Jim link
9/10/2021 05:36:15 am

I couldn't agree more, Sue.
Let the music play.

Thanks for the read and comment!
Take care
Jim

Padmini
9/10/2021 05:28:07 pm

When they said, 'They have outgrown their food and water resources', I thought it is us. The aliens are talking about us:) Music saved the humans in the end:)) Lovely story, Jim.

Jim link
9/10/2021 08:23:49 pm

Yeah, our reputation precedes us, eh? Music to the rescue. ;-) Thanks so much for the kind words Padmini
Take care
Jim

Doug
10/10/2021 10:37:43 pm

Great story Jim. I just saw a headline the other day stating we will run out of fresh water in 2040. Thanks again for the story.

Jim link
11/10/2021 03:54:16 pm

2040 - ugh. Zager and Evans were wondering if we'd make it to the year 2525.
Thanks much for the read and comment, Doug. Really appreciate it.
Take care
Jim

James B. Revell
12/10/2021 04:09:52 pm

This was a great idea, and very original. I look forward to the next one.
Cheers,
Jim R.

Jim link
12/10/2021 04:45:11 pm

Thanks, James! Very much appreciate your kind words!
Take care
Jim

Angela Carlton
15/10/2021 02:11:09 pm

A clever, colorful story with a musical touch that grab usl!!

Jim link
15/10/2021 04:37:11 pm

Thanks so much, Angela!
Appreciate the comment!
Take care
Jim

Pamela Kennedy
15/10/2021 11:43:31 pm

A great read..!

Jim link
16/10/2021 02:48:04 am

Well, thank you Pamela!! I really appreciate it!
Take care
Jim

Cindy Patrick
16/10/2021 03:40:36 am

I love your honesty about the human condition with some redemption in honouring art. Music and literature. What a package!

Jim link
27/11/2021 05:00:38 pm

Thanks, Cindy! It's pretty easy to sell off the human race, we're not a very nice lot, but there seems to be, at least in the eyes of some, a little redemption (as you point out) with our art, literature, and especially the wonderful music. Thanks so much for the read and insightful comment!
Jim


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