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The Words Unsaid, by Christa Loughrey

19/1/2024

 
The man attended funerals because the church was warmer than the streets, and there was usually a buffet of some sort down at the local pub afterwards. Nobody ever seemed to question one more among the crowd. It was interesting, he mused, that it took someone else’s death to provide him with the food and warmth he needed to keep body and soul together for another day.

He listened to carefully prepared speeches extolling the many virtues of the deceased person, and often found himself wondering – why did people always wait until someone died to say such lovely things about them?

Leaving the church one day, the man recognised a renowned poet among the mourners. He watched him help an elderly lady into a taxi, kiss her withered cheek, then turn to head for the pub.

‘Your mother?’

The poet turned at the question; took in the bearded face, the shabby clothes, and the clear, sharp blue eyes looking directly into his own. He hesitated, unsure of this stranger, but the circumstances called for politeness so he acknowledged that it was so.

The man put his hand gently on the poet’s arm.

‘We have not been introduced, but I know who you are. You have the gift of words. She is old; she will not be with you forever. Use your gift for her. Tell her the tale of her beauty within; tell it with love in every word. For your sake and hers, don’t leave it until it is too late.’

Then the man was gone, leaving the astonished poet deep in thought.

Two days later the old lady was sitting in her high backed chair in her neat little flat, one of several in a sheltered housing complex, waiting for her carer to arrive. Lately she had felt herself to be worthless; just a burden on society.

But today, she was holding a beautifully penned poem which reminded her of what she had been, and still was, at heart. In carefully chosen words her son had poured out all the story of her love and care of him; of his gratitude at the endless joys she had given him; of the great worth which he placed on her, the brightest jewel in the crown of his life.

Life suddenly glowed with a beauty she had all but forgotten. She was still cherished, and she knew that she had not lived in vain.
Don Tassone link
19/1/2024 10:32:36 am

What a beautiful story and touching reminder to tell our loved ones what they mean to us. Thank you, Christa.

Sivan Pillai
19/1/2024 12:47:15 pm

What one requires is some love while living, not praise after death. A realistic story, Christa.

John O’Keefe
19/1/2024 01:46:24 pm

Great picture: man goes to funerals to snatch free food and warmth. And there’s warmth with its allegorical meaning later in the story. Well done.

Christa Loughrey
19/1/2024 02:53:33 pm

Thank you all for your kind words. I was inspired to write this by my lovely sister, and I hope it will similarly inspire everyone who reads it.

Krystyna
20/1/2024 01:46:45 am

A tale to inspire others with its wisdom. Nicely presented, Christa.

Robert P. Bishop
20/1/2024 03:41:33 am

Great story, Christa. I enjoyed the wisdom in it...if you love someone tell them while they can still hear you. Thanks...

david milner
20/1/2024 10:12:59 am

I share the previous sentiments. Nicely controlled, Christa.

Paritosh Chandra Dugar
20/1/2024 02:13:40 pm

Christa, your story made me shed a tear. A poignant tale with an inspiring thought. Great job.

Sue Clayton
21/1/2024 12:06:54 am

Beautiful words, Christa, I'm sure as beautiful as the poet's, and a timely reminder to tell others how we feel when they are still around to hear our words.

Tom Baldwin
21/1/2024 03:52:24 am

A beautiful reminder of what we should all do, not only for our mothers.

Christa Loughrey
22/1/2024 09:11:21 am

A further thank you to you lovely people who have added such kind comments. They are all much appreciated.


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