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Unfinished Art, by Susan Fairfax Reid

13/11/2020

 
My Aunt Anne had something in common with famous writers, musicians, and artists. She pursued her art until her death and left an unfinished work.

It was an oil painting of bloodroots, the white petaled flowers with yellow centers that grow wildly in the woods and bloom early in the spring in patches of sunlight.

Cupped in large green leaves, the unusual wildflower
unwraps its layers in the morning and rewraps them at night. It was a favorite decoration in Aunt Anne's home. In a brandy snifter
filled with water, the flower looked like a decoration on a table at a candled wedding reception.

A poet may have been stirred to write a poem about the flower's birth in a shady area, comparing it to a loving relationship that blooms in a drug-infested area where other liaisons die.

A musician may have been encouraged to compose exciting song lyrics about meeting an alluring, and possibly dangerous, new lover wandering through the woods in a sheer, flowing ivory dress and a headband of flowers circling her long blond hair.

In her younger days, Aunt Anne hiked through the woods in boots, navy slacks, a red sweater, and red plaid flannel shirt with her boxer dog Bitzy, searching for the early bloomers. She wore gloves because handling bloodroots sometimes causes a rash similar to poison ivy.

Venturing into the woods could be dangerous for another reason. Stray dogs run wildly through the area. Aunt Anne carried a stick made of a fallen tree branch to ward them off as she trekked around the oak, poplar, and red maple trees. The tall trees stood like erect Marine Guards, protecting their inhabitants: plants, animals, and snakes.

As she grew older and needed a cane, Aunt Anne sent her daughter Anne Louise into the woods to collect the wildflowers.

Anne Louise shivered at the thought of going where the snakes slither, hiss, and play dead, but she gritted her teeth, put on boots, a trench coat, and gloves and gathered the bloodroots that captivated her mother.

Aunt Anne died at 88, leaving the still life incomplete. ”I was going to finish it, put stems and flowers on it, said Anne Louise, who is an artist. "But I decided to leave it in my room, as is." In its unfinished state, "Bloodroots" lets its viewers determine what Aunt Anne was trying to convey: beauty and danger, calmness, or something deeper.

Aunt Anne's still life joins other unfinished works, including "Answered Prayers," by Truman Capote, and the 10th symphony by Ludwig van Beethoven.
Mary Wallace
13/11/2020 01:57:14 pm

Interesting story Susan. Well written.

Susan Reid
13/11/2020 02:54:37 pm

Thanks, Mary. I see your busy commenting this morning.

Stacie
13/11/2020 03:37:21 pm

Well flowers are right up my alley in any story, but I think the artist left a message that she may be gone but not finished yet. This was one of my favorites Sue

Susan Reid
13/11/2020 08:18:47 pm

Stacie,

Glad you liked it. Believe, she's not finished yet. Her tremendous talent continues on.

Sue Clayton
14/11/2020 02:11:01 am

Unfinished art allows the admirer to imagine their own brush strokes adding the finishing touches, becoming one with Aunt Anne as they complete their own interpretation of the bloodroot artwork. Great word art, Susan.

Denise Aversa
15/11/2020 01:24:09 am

It makes one wonder how many other works of art are unfinished.

Tasha
25/11/2020 02:21:34 pm

This is a really beautiful and moving piece, and I've enjoyed reading the interpretations of others. For me, the unfinished work echoes of how abrupt loss can occur, and how many of us leave "unfinished art" behind. I think leaving it unfinished is a beautiful way to honor those we have lost.


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