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Unfinished Business, by Don Tassone

8/1/2021

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His accomplishments as CEO were unparalleled, yet his business was unfinished.

As a boy, he’d nearly drowned in a river near his home. Since then, he’d been terrified of the water.

Now he drove to his hometown and went down to the river. He stood on the bank and looked out at the spot where foam-lipped eddies had pulled him under, the spot whose memory had haunted him all these years, the source of his greatest fear.

He had come back to face it. Looking at it now, he realized how small and tame it really was. He realized he had let this one little spot deprive him of so much.

The river looked so beautiful to him. He had never really seen a river.

He sat down on a big rock, took off his shoes and socks and rolled up his pant legs. Then he got up and slowly waded in.
11 Comments
peppermint
8/1/2021 11:20:00 am

Facing our fears is such a challenge, yet one with a reward beyond words, a finding of our true self. Thank you, Don, for leading us into "deep water."

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Doug
8/1/2021 07:51:05 pm

Thank you Don. That is a great message within your story.

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phyllis souza
8/1/2021 08:17:43 pm

Great story about fear. Then overcoming it.

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Kathy K
9/1/2021 12:45:57 am

What have I missed in life because of a fear? Or what have I gained because of it? Hmmm. You’ve given me a push to ponder that one!

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Candace Arthuria Williams
9/1/2021 02:21:29 pm

Don, I held my breath as I reflected on Richard Cory. So glad he conquered his fear. Well done.

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Paritosh Chandra Dugar
9/1/2021 06:33:35 pm

A beautiful, motivational tale. Very well written, Don.

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Mary Wallace
9/1/2021 10:41:48 pm

One small step at a time. There was quiet beauty in your tale Don, thankyou.

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Don Tassone link
10/1/2021 11:51:31 am

Thank you all for your thoughtful comments.

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Swapan k Banerjee
10/1/2021 11:58:30 am

'Foam-lipped eddies' - beautiful, Don.

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Sue Clayton
11/1/2021 06:54:25 am

Baby steps to giant leaps that will overcome our fears. Good lesson on how to fly in the face of adversity, Don.

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Jennifer Duncan
20/1/2021 02:20:32 pm

I really liked this. Fear definitely deprives us of living fully, and are often unfounded. Nice flow to the writing.

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