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Unintentional, by Don Tassone

13/10/2023

 
Elise poured herself a glass of Chardonnay and, as she did nearly every Friday evening, ordered a small pizza for delivery.

How she wished she had someone to share it with. Elise had tried hard for years to find someone. Dating sites, church groups, happy hours, taking a bus to work, volunteering, taking classes, joining a gym, even becoming a “regular” at a coffee shop. But nothing worked. Now 35, Elise was still single.

Not that she heard her “biological clock ticking,” though she would welcome being a mother. But what she really wanted was a lover. Not for the sex, although she would welcome that too. But for the intimacy, someone with whom she could share her heart and whose heart she might hold dear.

Elise hadn’t found Mr. Right, but she kept her eyes open for any contenders. That’s partly why she ordered pizzas on Friday nights. Maybe her lover would appear in the form of a dashing pizza delivery guy. Alas, tonight’s potential candidate wasn’t shaving yet.

Elise poured another glass of wine, grabbed two slices of pizza and settled in for a movie. What to watch tonight? She’d seen every rom-com on Netflix and couldn't take another one anyway. She picked a documentary about five communities where people live extraordinarily long and vibrant lives. But she fell asleep before it was over.

The following morning, Elise went to a nearby coffee shop where she’d become a regular. On Saturdays, she always got there early, when it wasn’t crowded yet. She usually picked a small table in the corner from which she could see all the other customers. All the other prospects.

But by the end of every Saturday morning, Elise was one of the last customers left, and she hadn't met or even spotted any prospects. Maybe she’d seen too many rom-coms, but she kept expecting some handsome, or even not-so-handsome, guy to approach her table and say, “Would you mind some company?”

This Saturday, though, she’d slept in. Maybe it was that third glass of wine. At any rate, she didn’t get to the coffee shop until mid-morning. By then, the place was packed.

Elise had never gotten a coffee to go but, standing in the long line, she considered it. She didn’t see an open table. Nor did she see any tables where cute guys were sitting alone.

But maybe the early morning coffee drinkers would be leaving soon. She went ahead and ordered her usual latte in a ceramic mug.

By the time it was ready, though, the place was still full. Standing near the door, she looked around, hoping someone would leave but ready to pour her latte into a paper cup.

“You’re welcome to share my table,” someone said.

Elise looked over. Right next to her stood a 30-something man with broad shoulders and a kind face. He was standing alone at a tall table with no chairs. Elise hadn't even noticed that table before.
Libby Belle link
13/10/2023 12:09:19 pm

"Looking for love in all the wrong places," popped up in my head and now that song and Elise will be in my head all day. A valuable lesson to change perspective and allow ourselves to see what's right in front of our nose. Thank you for the lovely reminder.

David Lowis
13/10/2023 03:27:37 pm

Sometimes you can look too hard. I like how you tell a story, Don.

Kathy K.
13/10/2023 11:43:09 pm

I agree with David. Sometimes we look right past the person who is just perfect for us. The problem in looking for a partner is that we can be very judgmental about appearances and miss the treasure inside.

Tom Baldwin
14/10/2023 04:19:46 am

So poignant, with a promise of hope for a lasting relationship.

Sivan Pillai
14/10/2023 05:09:04 am

Her patience has paid off at last. Enjoyed it, Don.

Padmini
14/10/2023 08:53:37 am

Agree with Kathy. Hope he would be the right person for Elsie.

Don Tassone link
14/10/2023 11:30:36 am

Thank you all. "And think not you can direct the course of love, for love, if it finds you worthy, directs your course." — Kahlil Gibran


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