They won’t find the body in that time…
Delayed! No, no, no! Can’t they do anything right? Is taking off on time too much to ask? Arrrggh! All right, all right, calm down, people are looking. You have to relax, it’s just a half hour delay. Not so bad. Go to the café, have one of their over-priced coffees. You’ll be on board before you know it. In a week’s time I’ll be sunning myself on a beach, looking back at this moment and laughing. It’s only half an hour. It doesn’t make a difference.
They won’t find the body in that time…
Norman Shaft
23/7/2021 11:40:22 am
Nice twist, totally unexpected!
Pamela Kennedy
23/7/2021 12:35:02 pm
Nice surprise ending, Bill
Marjan Sierhuis
23/7/2021 01:04:39 pm
Looking forward to a longer story, Bill. Don't keep us in suspense.
Fliss Zakaszewska
23/7/2021 06:11:20 pm
Great twist and agree with Marjan and Jim. There is more to this story!
Susan F. Reid
23/7/2021 06:44:30 pm
Funniest story I've read in ages, Bill.
Sandra James
23/7/2021 11:11:29 pm
Brilliant, Bill. I certainly didn't see that coming. Well done!
Jennifer Duncan
24/7/2021 01:21:07 am
Can really feel the frustration and then, with the twist, the fear. Great story.
Sue Clayton
24/7/2021 04:03:58 am
Thought it was going to be a plane crash; turns out to be a murder mystery. Nicely fooled, Bill.
Elizabeth Zahn
24/7/2021 12:03:00 pm
I didn't see the big deal of a half hour delay...... but when you're on the run it is. Great twist.
Mary Wallace
24/7/2021 05:37:12 pm
This was great Bill. With one little line you had us picturing an entire back story. Loved it.
Paul Lewthwaite
25/7/2021 11:40:38 am
Loved it. Captured mood of frustrated 'tourist' then great twist at the end. Comments are closed.
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