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Out of the Mouths of Babes, by Libby Belle

17/11/2023

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(Image credit: the author)
Eight-year-old Becky attended her very first funeral.

Standing alongside her grandmother’s open casket, her mother said, “Rest in peace, Nana.”

Becky reached inside the coffin and felt the soft pillowy lining.
She remembered how the miserable old gal often complained of her dreadfully hard bed, her wretched bad back, and her husband’s constant snoring.

But instead of the usual etched frown, Becky saw a rare smile lifting her grandmother’s painted wrinkled lips.

Looking up at her mother’s tear-filled eyes, she whispered, “Nana looks like she’s enjoying her new soft bed. I think she is finally resting in peace now, mama.”

13 Comments
Don Tassone link
17/11/2023 11:24:44 am

Sweet. Well done, Libby.

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Tony link
17/11/2023 01:17:39 pm

Let's hope so.

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Angela link
17/11/2023 01:31:53 pm

I love how surprisingly refreshing the perspective of children are and how much wisdom they have to teach us. Great story. It's like a tiny hug.

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Paul Freeman
17/11/2023 01:55:26 pm

From the mouths of babes...

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Krystyna
17/11/2023 05:19:34 pm

Peace and comfort at last for Nana. Love what Becky said in the last paragraph. Well written, Libby.

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Cheryl Dahlstrand
17/11/2023 08:33:54 pm

The moment of farewell from two perspectives. Plus, the magical photo!
Well written and well illustrated.

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Libby Belle link
17/11/2023 09:57:28 pm

Thank you all for reading and commenting. Have a great weekend, and I hope something fantastic happens to give you something to write about.

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Brian Mackinney
18/11/2023 10:21:54 am

A peaceful comfort.

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Pamela Kennedy
18/11/2023 09:08:49 pm

So very touching...

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Sue Clayton
19/11/2023 01:05:27 am

This was lovely.

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Elizabeth Elder link
19/11/2023 02:47:32 am

Nice. I love this.

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Ruby Lyn Norada
19/11/2023 06:18:35 am

Nana's smile was rare, but for the child to see it one last time, must have been comforting. Nicely done, Libby.

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Christa Loughrey
22/11/2023 03:29:53 pm

A lovely ending, Libby.

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