As they exited this wonderful experience Jacob glanced over his shoulder and saw the Red Sea come crashing down on the Egyptian army.
Jacob, being rushed along by his nervous parents, enjoyed looking at the various species of fish on both sides of him. He couldn’t understand why his parents were in such a hurry. He could have stayed there for hours. It was almost like he was in the water with them. He felt like he could actually reach out and touch them but everytime he tried, one of his parents would pull his hand back.
As they exited this wonderful experience Jacob glanced over his shoulder and saw the Red Sea come crashing down on the Egyptian army.
Pamela Kennedy
22/10/2021 01:13:26 pm
Loved it!
Doug
22/10/2021 06:32:31 pm
Glad you enjoyed it Pamela. Thank you.
Doug
25/10/2021 12:31:48 am
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for your comment.
Mike B
22/10/2021 03:40:10 pm
Short and Sweet!!! I enjoyed it!! Good job Doug!!!
Doug
22/10/2021 06:30:27 pm
Glad you enjoyed it Mike. Thanks for your comments.
Doug
22/10/2021 06:16:54 pm
Yes, but what an event. Thanks Jim.
Chuck J Anderson
22/10/2021 05:01:25 pm
Totally blindsided, great!
Doug
22/10/2021 06:15:24 pm
Glad I caught you looking the other way. Thanks Chuck.
Lynn Messing
22/10/2021 09:44:51 pm
Brilliant.
Doug
22/10/2021 09:51:42 pm
Thank you Lynn for that wonderful comment.
Sue Clayton
23/10/2021 05:53:27 am
Wow. What a great surprise ending. I could imagine a small child being awed by wonder while his parents felt sheer terror at the parting of the waves.
Doug
24/10/2021 06:06:09 am
Thank you Sue. I appreciate your comments.
Jennifer Duncan
23/10/2021 03:17:11 pm
What a great story! So original and well done.
Doug
24/10/2021 06:07:39 am
Thank you for those kind words. 24/10/2021 05:42:54 am
This is incredible! I wasn't ready for it to be the Red Sea!! I love the big reveal. So masterfully done!
Doug
24/10/2021 06:09:37 am
Thank you Susmita for those comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Fliss Zakaszewska
24/10/2021 10:39:48 pm
That was a twist to end all twists! Brilliant.
Doug
25/10/2021 12:36:15 am
Thank you so much for your very kind comments Fliss.
Bill Sells
25/10/2021 02:20:40 am
Great perspective, Doug. I want to see...
Doug
25/10/2021 02:23:20 am
Thank you Bill. Comments are closed.
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