She glanced up at her young son-in-law pacing the floor and nodded to him that she would honor their nearly impossible pact. All the crying would be done here and now, and when her daughter was brought back to her hospital room, she would be strong. They both would.
Dull gray walls reflected the doom in the waiting area where Jackie sat poised to hear the results of her daughter’s surgery. She shoved tear-stained tissues into her pocket as she silently beseeched God to transfer the illness to her. She would give anything to switch places with her sick child.
She glanced up at her young son-in-law pacing the floor and nodded to him that she would honor their nearly impossible pact. All the crying would be done here and now, and when her daughter was brought back to her hospital room, she would be strong. They both would.
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Paul Freeman
17/11/2023 01:52:41 pm
Yep, there's a time to cry and a time to stay strong.
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Angela Carlton
17/11/2023 01:53:21 pm
Powerful, a fine example of delicate moments.
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Krystyna
17/11/2023 05:06:03 pm
A difficult time. Well described, Peggy.
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Cheryl Dahlstrand
17/11/2023 08:21:16 pm
Powerful commentary on the confidence faith can provide. Dramatic set up and conclusion that anticipates a positive outcome.
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17/11/2023 09:42:47 pm
It is important, but hard, to be strong. Masterfully illustrated, Peggy.
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Tom Baldwin
18/11/2023 02:50:32 am
A beautiful story of love and strength, Peggy.
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Brian Mackinney
18/11/2023 10:11:01 am
A powerful bond.
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Peggy Gerber
18/11/2023 01:36:51 pm
Thanks so much for the thoughtful comments.
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Pamela Kennedy
18/11/2023 08:54:03 pm
It's a true struggle to remain strong under stressful circumstances.
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Sue Clayton
19/11/2023 12:59:01 am
Hope their strength pulled her through to a time when they could cry tears of joy.
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Ruby Lyn Norada
19/11/2023 05:42:27 am
Must have taken a lot for both of them to keep a strong and cheerful disposition in such a delicate time. Touching story, Peggy.
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Christa Loughrey
22/11/2023 03:14:42 pm
Being strong for others' sake is a true sign of love. Very well written.
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