Gordon's Choice On the northern edge of the forest, a wolf howls. The fire crackles and spits as I sit crosslegged staring into the flames, hunched and shivering. A twig snaps, then another. My heart begins to thump so hard it must surely be heard by whatever is approaching. A shuffle of leaves close behind; I pull my hunting knife, ready to thrust it home. A gust of wind whips up the flames as I turn to face the unfortunate intruder. Piggy eyes lock onto mine. ‘Oink, oink,’ I mumble. He blinks and trundles onwards, snuffling softly, until the darkness swallows him.
Gloria Curl
26/4/2024 11:53:46 am
Thanks so much, Don. 🙂
Dee Lorraine
26/4/2024 07:13:18 pm
I love the way the tension builds here. Oink, oink, indeed. Congratulations, Gloria!
Glo Curl
26/4/2024 09:20:07 pm
Cheers Dee! A tense moment for both methinks, lol.
Sue Clayton
28/4/2024 03:32:27 am
As tense for me as for the two characters. 4/5/2024 08:28:20 pm
Scene set, tension palpable, fabulous ending. Love it, Glo. x Comments are closed.
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