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Holy Night, by Rob Wolf

15/12/2021

 
Colorful twinkling lights sent faint orbs of comfort through the crisp city wind. Sitting looking out over the harbour, Lawrence sat in limbo, waiting to hear whether his father would make it through the night or if he would be planning a trip to attend his funeral. He felt the gap between what he cherished of him and the inevitable sadness that would eventually consume him.
He heard carolers in the distance, behind the sound of busses and car horns. As they grew closer, the strains of “sleep in heavenly peace,” rose above the din, and he knew.

Jim B link
15/12/2021 05:47:24 pm

Melancholy but so well done, Rob
Jim

Rob Wolf
15/12/2021 06:21:03 pm

Thank you Jim.

Mary Wallace
15/12/2021 05:56:27 pm

Beautiful Rob.

Rob Wolf
15/12/2021 06:21:36 pm

Thanks Mary. 😊

Peggy Gerber
15/12/2021 06:57:37 pm

You painted a picture of a scenario that has happened or will happen to us all.

Rob Wolf
15/12/2021 07:03:23 pm

Yes, and how the world sometimes provides comfort in loss. Thank you for your comment.

Sandra James
15/12/2021 07:19:36 pm

Very well written, Rob. It says it all and describes so well the gamut of emotions.

Rob Wolf
15/12/2021 07:28:33 pm

Thank you Sandra.

Marjan Sierhuis
15/12/2021 07:39:56 pm

Your story presents a roller coaster of emotions, Rob. Nicely written.

Rob Wolf
15/12/2021 07:40:41 pm

Thank you!

Dee Lorraine
15/12/2021 08:09:55 pm

I love that "sleep in heavenly peace" transition. Thank you, Rob.

Rob Wolf
15/12/2021 10:16:27 pm

Thank you Dee.

Pamela Kennedy
15/12/2021 09:20:27 pm

So very touching...nicely done, Rob.

Rob Wolf
15/12/2021 10:16:44 pm

Thanks Pamela. 😊

Faye Rapoport DesPres link
15/12/2021 10:16:13 pm

Touching and sad, and lovely description.

Rob Wolf
15/12/2021 10:32:43 pm

Thank you Faye.

Doug
15/12/2021 11:59:47 pm

Well written Rob. I subject I think everyone can relate to. I know I could.

Rob Wolf
16/12/2021 01:36:08 am

Thank you Doug.

Sue Clayton
16/12/2021 02:33:49 am

Beautiful, Rob. Going to sleep in heavenly peace is what our children, and what we ourselves, would wish for.

Rob Wolf
16/12/2021 02:19:45 pm

Thank you Sue.

Cathy MacKenzie
16/12/2021 04:03:21 am

Great story, Rob.

Rob Wolf
16/12/2021 02:20:23 pm

Thanks Cathy! I appreciate it.

Elizabeth Zahn
16/12/2021 04:07:28 pm

Beautiful!

Rob Wolf
17/12/2021 02:58:36 am

Thank you Elizabeth.

Fliss Zakaszewska
16/12/2021 06:28:30 pm

Touching story. Well told.

Rob Wolf
17/12/2021 02:58:59 am

Thank you Fliss.


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