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Letty, by Sue Clayton

4/12/2022

33 Comments

 
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Letty watches from afar. She can’t play with the other lambs, her legs are crooked and weak.

“That one’s useless,” glowers Farmer Blenkinsop. “She’s for the meat works.”

“No, dear,” Mrs Blenkinsop chides. “I have a use for her.”

“It’s a real lamb,” little ones whisper as Mrs Blenkinsop carries Letty to the altar’s nativity scene. She lays her next to the Baby Jesus. “Away in a Manger,” voices warble.

Letty nibbles at the manger’s hay, licks the baby’s porcelain face.

The congregation gasps as her fleece radiates a warm glow.

“Ma-ah,” she bleats, rising on strong, straight limbs.

33 Comments
Mimi Grouse
4/12/2022 01:37:11 pm

Oh, this is so beautiful. It brought tears! xx

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Peggy Gerber
4/12/2022 02:18:29 pm

What a truly lovely story.

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Marjan Sierhuis
4/12/2022 02:21:57 pm

Beautiful story, Sue.

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Mary Daurio
4/12/2022 03:24:33 pm

Love your story, Sue, and didn't see the miracle coming. So good.

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Mary Anne mc Enery
4/12/2022 04:23:58 pm

loved your Christmas miracle story and loved the name Farmer Blenkinsop................suited him.

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Cindy Patrick
4/12/2022 04:37:14 pm

Filled my heart, Sue! Gorgeous.

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Lorraine Murphy
4/12/2022 07:10:23 pm

Lovely story. I didn't see it coming.

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Krystyna
4/12/2022 07:57:55 pm

A Christmas miracle to warm our hearts. Thank you, Sue!

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Doug
5/12/2022 01:30:47 am

Thanks Sue for the heartwarming story.

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Geraint Williams
5/12/2022 09:26:02 am

Heartstrings pulled without a sentimental chord being struck. A lovely read.

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Don Tassone link
5/12/2022 12:31:34 pm

Beautiful, Sue.

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Fliss Zakaszewska
6/12/2022 12:07:36 am

We all need a Christmas miracle. Thanks, Sue.

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Cheryl Dahlstrand
6/12/2022 06:14:34 pm

That we could only recognize all miracles this way!

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Sue Clayton
7/12/2022 04:01:30 am

I had a lamb with crooked, weak legs. She couldn't stand. I called her Hope. It wasn't a Christmas miracle, but a miracle nonetheless. Medication, massage, steroids, but mostly TLC that saw her stand on strong, straight limbs.

Glad I could give you all a little Christmas spirit. Ma-ah.

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David Milner
9/12/2022 01:01:11 pm

There you go, Letty. Tell Sue if you see her to break open a tinny for me. Height of summer for our Antipodean friends. Lots of love.

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Rashna Tessa Walton
7/12/2022 11:43:06 am

Thank you Sue, I read your beautiful story through increasingly tear filled eyes.

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Kendra Judge
20/12/2022 03:00:47 am

Heartwarming. Congratulations on making the shortlist!

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Jacqui Wiley
20/12/2022 06:59:50 am

A Christmas miracle, what a beautiful story

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Rashna Tessa Walton
24/12/2022 03:07:01 am

CONGRATULATIONS, Sue

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Mimi Grouse
24/12/2022 05:41:37 am

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!

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Andrew Newall
24/12/2022 11:02:43 am

Congratulations on your win. I didn't know where this story was leading and the ending was a pleasant surprise. Very uplifting.

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Andrew Martin
24/12/2022 11:13:19 am

Well done Sue! You can't beat a Christmas story that resonates with the original Christmas story with similar themes.
Andy (winner of the Christmas FFF 2020)

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Candace Arthuria
24/12/2022 12:54:11 pm

Congratulations, Sue! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

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Sankar Chatterjee
24/12/2022 03:39:42 pm

Hello Sue:

Congratulations, a well-desrved recognition.

Happy holidays,
Sankar

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Krystyna
24/12/2022 05:11:52 pm

Congratulations, Sue, on winning th Christmas contest. Beautiful, heartwarming story.

Merry Christmas and all the best for 2023 to you and yours!

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Jim Bartlett link
25/12/2022 09:00:37 pm

A hearty and heartfelt congratulations, Sue. Well deserved.
And warmest wishes for a wonderful Holiday, and the happiest of New Years.
Jim

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Alyce
26/12/2022 01:14:25 am

This was such a lovely, heartwarming holiday story, Sue. Congratulations on your win!

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Ceri Marriott
27/12/2022 06:11:20 pm

Congratulations, Sue, great story.

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Tom Baldwin
27/12/2022 07:37:50 pm

A lovely, heart-warming story, Sue. Congratulations!

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Suzy Rosen
28/12/2022 07:57:47 pm

Beautiful story, Sue. Congratulations!

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Dee Lorraine
28/12/2022 09:16:44 pm

You gave us a beautiful story of hope, love and miracles, right on time, Sue. A well-deserved win. Congratulations!

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Sue
29/12/2022 08:59:48 pm

Just - “Awwwww”

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Toni
30/12/2022 05:10:10 pm

Loved every word of this story! Congrats!

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