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My Doll, by Phyllis Souza

27/1/2023

 
"You're too old. Give that doll to your cousin." My mother said.
After years of loving my doll, I handed it over in perfect condition.
When my younger cousin grabbed it. The doll cried, "mama."
Tears hid in my throat.
I went home. Opened the door.
"Well, did you get rid of the doll?" Mother asked.
"Yes. I did.” Tears rolled down my cheeks.
A week later, I visited my cousin. My doll was lying floor without an arm.
Pamela Kennedy
27/1/2023 09:05:42 am

I'm sure she cried again...any girl who had a favorite doll could relate to your story.

phyllis souza
27/1/2023 10:00:52 pm

Thank you! Yes, I'm sure she cried.

Jacqui Wiley
27/1/2023 09:21:17 am

Heartbreaking, a doll becomes part of you as a young girll

Phyllis Souza
27/1/2023 10:03:51 pm

A doll, especially when you are an only child, becomes real. Thank you for your comment.

Mimi Grouse
27/1/2023 11:20:00 am

I hope she finds the courage to take her doll back. Standing up against bullies starts at a young age...
Well written, Phyllis.

phyllis souza
27/1/2023 10:05:32 pm

She left the doll. But never forgot. Thank you for the comment.

Jim Bartlett link
27/1/2023 04:15:38 pm

"Tears hid in my throat." A great line that really speaks to the story.
I'm sure when she saw that doll a week later, those tears could no longer play hide and seek.
Jim

phyllis souza
27/1/2023 10:07:32 pm

Jim, those tears are still hiding. Thanks for reading.

Bobby Warner
27/1/2023 05:48:38 pm

A sad story very, very well told!

phyllis souza
27/1/2023 10:09:19 pm

Sad when you're forced to give up childhood. Thank you for reading.

Kim Favors
27/1/2023 07:01:25 pm

I grew sad reading this. Well done!

phyllis souza
27/1/2023 10:11:13 pm

Kim, I also grew sad while writing it. Phyllis

Jennifer Duncan
27/1/2023 07:53:32 pm

I was very attached to my stuffed teddies and made sure that I paid equal attention to them. I can really identify with this story. How heartless some adults are.

phyllis souza
27/1/2023 10:14:29 pm

Losing a favorite doll or a stuffed teddy, is like losing your best friend. 😢

Sue Clayton
28/1/2023 03:27:15 am

A mother forced to give away her baby, only to see it suffer doll abuse. Cruel.

phyllli souza
28/1/2023 03:53:34 pm

Cruel is the right word. Thanks for reading.

Padmini
28/1/2023 12:10:19 pm

Spending hours sewing dresses and caps for your dolls...Children who talk like dolls and talk to dolls can definitely identify with this story. Well-written from a child's POV.

phyllis souza
28/1/2023 03:55:24 pm

Something the child will never forget. Thank you!

Mary Daurio
28/1/2023 10:05:31 pm

Oh Marie. You made me cry. It seemed so real. Thanks for that, you know its a good story when it makes you feel something.

phyllis souza
28/1/2023 10:34:08 pm

Mary it makes one wonder, how children have experienced the loss of their beloved doll or stuffed toy. Gone are nights when they cuddled together in bed. I'm crying too. Phyllis


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