The woman cries; she watched TV, while he recovered from jet lag. She asks for a different room. She will live, while he has joined the sleepless dead, forever trudging through the corridors.
A black bagged body is carried from the hotel room. The shimmering man watches. He can see past the navy sheets and pillowcases, the scarlet duvet, the intricately carved headboard to see the bed as it really is: a writhing mass of undulating tentacles, a set of glowing red eyes, a mouth of shadowy fangs still dripping with the life-force of its most recent kill. It smiles.
The woman cries; she watched TV, while he recovered from jet lag. She asks for a different room. She will live, while he has joined the sleepless dead, forever trudging through the corridors.
Bobby Warner
9/10/2020 02:55:10 pm
Wow. "nice" little nightmare piece. Liked it.
Susan F. Reid
9/10/2020 04:03:21 pm
Good Halloween story.
Sue Clayton
10/10/2020 02:54:30 am
Horror Hotel. Remind me never to book in. More needed on the shimmering man.
Mary Wallace
10/10/2020 10:31:23 am
I think I'll avoid room15 from now on as you didn't mention the hotel name.
V. L. Draven
15/10/2020 09:46:25 pm
Hi guys. Thanks for all the comments. Hotels can certainly be spooky places, and I think they can be good settings for horror stories. One of my favourite stories like this is the Shining, by Stephen King. "Number 15", however, is certainly not intended to be set in the Overlook. Instead, it could be any hotel, big or small, where a demon in the shape of a bed has taken up residence. Comments are closed.
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